Non-Disc Record - Bolterpyre

Summary:

Doesn't really get site, problematic feedback

Non-Disc Record - Bolterpyre

Zyn 02 Jun 2018 04:52

New site member Bolterpyre (account age and site membership 18 days) has recently posted a fair bit of vague critique:

http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-6041064/scp-xxxx:ere-s-olah#post-3820584

Wow, that's awesome! How did it do that—

You know what, nevermind. I might make myself look like a fool for my comment.

Anyway, is this an SCP or a Tale? It's intriguing. Is this a finished draft already?

http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5836690/a-new-goi-idea#post-3807135

This idea awesome! Let me know if you need help. I wanted to assist you about this idea of yours really bad.

http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5986045/application-to-form-mtf-omicron-10#post-3809465

The concept behind the Task Force was pretty badass. It's like Halo meets Supernatural. Though I was confused about their role in combat when the Task Force was completely comprised of engineers and non-combat personnel AND I couldn't quite understand why they would be classified as a combat-type MTF when their role is clearly stated "Support."

All in all, your idea is great and I was hoping that if this one gets approved, I would write tales about them. […]

As well as some general not-getting-the-site behavior:

• Posting the same post in a new post and a reply (DrCaroll Junior Staff posted): http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5941628/scp-ideas-mirror-scp-or-a-wooden-sculpture-scp#post-3800593
• Replying to own post (DrCaroll Junior Staff posted): http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5941628/scp-ideas-mirror-scp-or-a-wooden-sculpture-scp#post-3801237
• Appears to be asking for feedback on their own ideas in another person’s idea thread: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5836690/a-new-goi-idea#post-3808247 and http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5836690/a-new-goi-idea#post-3809414
• Four drafts in a short period of time: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5946475/the-slimy-swamp-monster-of-south-carolina-first-scp http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5982663/second-draft-scp http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5987753/log-tale-of-a-security-guard http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-6040270/steampunk-scp#post-3820596
• Passive-aggressive response directed at the author of low-content feedback: http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-6040270/steampunk-scp#post-3820615

Thank you to Jazstar for compiling the list above and noting the critique issues.

Keep an eye on.

Last edited on 02 Jun 2018 04:52 by Zyn Show more

Re: Non-Disc Record - Bolterpyre

Zyn 16 Sep 2018 19:03

And they're back with another draft that seems to have been sloppily put together without getting the concept checked first… even though they've been told to do so many times. Additionally, the draft has a lot of the same simple writing errors (non-metric measurements, excessively "rule of cool" containment procedures including gratuitous titanium, etc.) as seen in their previous works: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-7515349/house-eating-scp

I've left a (non-staff) post letting them know that reviewers do remember when someone repeatedly fails to listen to feedback. Keep an eye on.

Re: Non-Disc Record - Bolterpyre

Zyn 18 Dec 2018 08:12

Problematic feedback today: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-9440975/doomed-to-repeat#post-4089659

[…]
Also, Amnesiacs are better sounding but it's up to you.

It lacks a story and it comes off as "Bland". It would help if it has explanation why the object does this and does that. Also, if it was made interesting through various stories that makes perfect sense […]

[…] It makes no sense even if it was aligned with Series I items, it still makes no sense.

Also, a bunch of recommended "fixes" that either overcomplicated the text or introduced errors.

Keep an eye on.

Re: Non-Disc Record - Bolterpyre

Zyn 23 Jul 2023 06:46

Noting disc thread: http://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-16185669/disciplinary-bolterpyre