BananaRepublic does not match any existing user name has recently been giving some vague and unhelpful critique in the forums, including today:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-2213562/chemistress-my-first-scp#post-2788947
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I want you to make me feel something. Interest me, entertain me, make me feel sad, make me angry, fuck, ANYTHING! That's the main problem with the article (other than the lack of a story and just terrible clinical tone): it didn't make me feeling anything.The object itself doesn't peak my interesting. I don't really know why myself, it just doesn't make me interested.
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http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-2214342/looking-for-critique-feedback#post-2788934
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Main problems with draft:
grammar and clinical problems.
- It hurts the article, badly. There are probably more grammar problems in the article than I already pointed out, so best to either proof read it or get someone else to proof read it for you.
lack of interesting object
- greatly harms article. Fix this ASAP
lack of interesting narrative.
- same thing. Fix ASAP
Of note, if I recall correctly, they also made a rather vitriolic post on someone's joke article, which incidentally they'd made a notice of on O5: http://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-2158991/disciplinary-morphogenetic-field#post-2787513
Soulless told me that BananaRepublic is no longer on the Site Crit team. BananaRepublic has since edited the posts above, but this behavior merits keeping a record of.