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Dr DeCreon (account age 1951 days, site membership 2 days) recently posted multiple instances of AI-generated feedback in the official Discord:
Primary example: https://discord.com/channels/877710488673329162/1500172515652272168/1515052167348621433
Hi, here for the crit swap
Critique 1 — Interactions in the containment cell with the SCP Skeleton
The story is interesting, and the life of the D-Class works well as an introduction. However, some scenes could benefit from more direct dialogue from the character, especially inside the cell during the encounter with the SCP.
With more verbal interaction before the main event, the scene would build more tension, making the death feel more abrupt and unexpected. In its current form, some moments move too quickly into action without exploring the character’s emotional response in depth.
Critique 2 — SCP-173 cell interaction and scene consistency
The second part is also engaging, but the scene inside SCP-173’s containment cell could benefit from more dialogue between the D-Class subjects, which would increase immersion and make the situation more tense.
Additionally, there is a point of confusion in the sequence of events: the moment where the character runs to the door and tries to call for help feels contradictory, since SCP-173 would have already acted by that point, considering that the other two individuals had already been eliminated.
Another issue involves Amelia’s dialogue, where she mentions having seen the character being attacked before that event actually occurs. This can be interpreted in two ways: either as a continuity error, or as a hint that the character has some form of temporal or future perception. However, this is not clearly established in the text.
Critique 3 — The recurring figure in the visions and dreams
The recurring figure that appears in the dreams is an interesting idea and creates a strong sense of mystery. However, it could be better defined visually and sensorially.
It would help to include more details about its appearance, such as:
whether it is a silhouette or a defined shape
whether it is completely dark, distorted, or blurred
its approximate height
and any associated sensations (pressure, silence, discomfort, etc.)
Without these elements, the figure remains too abstract, which slightly reduces its impact as a recurring entity within the narrative.
Critique 1 — Interactions in the containment cell with the SCP Skeleton
The story is interesting, and the life of the D-Class works well as an introduction. However, some scenes could benefit from more direct dialogue from the character, especially inside the cell during the encounter with the SCP.
With more verbal interaction before the main event, the scene would build more tension, making the death feel more abrupt and unexpected. In its current form, some moments move too quickly into action without exploring the character’s emotional response in depth.
Critique 2 — SCP-173 cell interaction and scene consistency
The second part is also engaging, but the scene inside SCP-173’s containment cell could benefit from more dialogue between the D-Class subjects, which would increase immersion and make the situation more tense.
Compare with the user's sandbox page: https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/the-living-grimoire which also has AI hallmarks of both generation and assistance/revision:
Special Containment Procedures:
SCP-8534 Containment Requirements: The containment chamber must be built with reinforced construction, and have an area of no less than 20 m². It must house a gold and silver altar constructed per remaining directives, inscribed with the SCP-XXXX-P42 sigil.
The SCP-XXXX-R132 ritual need to be performed when necessary to correct any fluctuations in the index.
Transport of SCP-8534 requires armed escort, Hume monitoring, and a reserves of blank volumes to maintain containment stability.
Permanently banned, PM sent.
