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KayraTSK1 (account age 79 days, site membership 1 day) recently coldposted the following concept critique thread, which has multiple indicators of AI-generation: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17585284/seeking-greenlight-scp-xxxx-a-city-of-flesh-and-bone
Of note, current post is a revision. The first iteration was missing the Central Narrative section.
Seeking Greenlights: Yes
Page Type: SCP Article
Genre (Optional): Horror, Action, History
Page Layout (Optional): Standard SCP layout. It will include detailed biological descriptions of the city's "infrastructure," recovered logs from the Bronze Age, and a high-stakes exploration log from an MTF team.
Elevator Pitch: The SCP is a subterranean, sentient city-state dating back to 1200 BC, where every structure is made of living biological tissue—roads of muscle, buildings of bone, and a power grid of giant hearts. It is not just a location, but a massive predatory organism that consumes its inhabitants to fuel its growth. The narrative reveals that the Bronze Age Collapse was actually a global effort to "starve" the city into dormancy, but now, it is beginning to wake up and recolonize the surface like a spreading tumor.
Central Narrative: The story begins when a mining operation accidentally breaks into a "lung chamber" of the city, causing it to start "breathing" again. The Foundation sends in an MTF unit to explore. They discover that the city is not just a location, but a predator that consumes its inhabitants to expand its borders. Historical scrolls found at the site suggest that ancient civilizations didn't just live in this city—they were part of it, serving as its nervous system. The narrative focuses on the horror of the city attempting to "recolonize" the surface by growing biological "suburbs" that sprout from the ground like tumors.
Hook/Attention-Grabber (Optional): Imagine a city that doesn't need electricity because it has a pulse. The hook is the visceral, architectural horror of a metropolis that views human beings as either fuel or building material. It reframes the 1200 BC collapse as the last time humanity managed to "starve" this city into dormancy
Additional Notes (Optional): I want to explore the "urban biology" aspect in great detail—how a city eats, breathes, and defends itself. Since English is not my native language, I am looking for feedback on how to make the clinical descriptions feel more immersive and terrifying.
Excerpts of note:
Elevator Pitch: The SCP is a subterranean, sentient city-state dating back to 1200 BC, where every structure is made of living biological tissue—roads of muscle, buildings of bone, and a power grid of giant hearts. It is not just a location, but a massive predatory organism that consumes its inhabitants to fuel its growth. The narrative reveals that the Bronze Age Collapse was actually a global effort to "starve" the city into dormancy, but now, it is beginning to wake up and recolonize the surface like a spreading tumor.
They discover that the city is not just a location, but a predator that consumes its inhabitants to expand its borders. Historical scrolls found at the site suggest that ancient civilizations didn't just live in this city—they were part of it, serving as its nervous system. The narrative focuses on the horror of the city attempting to "recolonize" the surface by growing biological "suburbs" that sprout from the ground like tumors.
When addressed about the AI phrasing, the user responded: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17585284/seeking-greenlight-scp-xxxx-a-city-of-flesh-and-bone#post-7544488
I understand why the phrasing might look like that, but no, I didn't just 'generate' this. As I mentioned, English is not my native language, so I used some tools to help polish my grammar and make my ideas more clear for a global audience. The 'Not X but Y' structure is just how I wanted to emphasize the dual nature of the city. These are my own concepts—flesh architecture, the 1200 BC link, and the biological power grid are ideas I've been developing for a while. I’m here for genuine feedback on the story, not for an AI to write it for me.
ETA: ban enacted, PM sent. Queerious supporting.
