Noting that new site member Nebryx (account age 3 days, site membership 2 days) recently posted the following concept critique thread: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17563150/the-breathing-mountain
Hi, this is my draft for my SCP. my SCP is a large, snow-covered mountain that fluctuates in size, emits voices, and contains an apparently infinite cave system. The article escalates from Euclid to Apollyon following a failed MTF expedition and evidence of rapid anomalous growth.
I’m mainly looking for feedback on:
Whether the escalation to Apollyon feels earned
If the infinite cave system is too much
and it is a good concept
Thanks.
Later changed to the following, before being blanked:
Elevator Pitch: this article is about a big snowy mountain that grows, moves, and shrinks.
Central Narrative: the origin of this SCP is unknown. but it was founded in Oslo Norway wen a 5.9 Magnitude earthquake struck. sightings reported then a huge mountain has formed 3.2 miles away form a public park.
User also has a sandbox with AI-indicators: https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/wyatts-sandy full draft in page creation, no edits
Excerpts of note:
Item #: SCP-9047
Object Class: Euclid → Apollyon
Special Containment Procedures: SCP-9047 is monitored exclusively via satellite imaging, seismic sensors, and autonomous aerial drones. A permanent exclusion zone with an 80 km radius has been established around the base. No personnel may enter this zone without authorization from at least two Level 4 researchers.
Mapping attempts using drones, probes, and autonomous rovers fail; devices either lose signal or report impossible spatial data. Some probes traverse kilometers without changes in elevation, while others report non-Euclidean geometry.
Temperature inside SCP-9047 is inconsistent, ranging from extreme cold to above-freezing conditions despite the surrounding ice.
Addendum 9047-1: Discovery SCP-9047 was discovered after satellite surveys identified a mountain that shifted location between passes. Initial expeditions classified it as Euclid after personnel reported auditory hallucinations near the mountain
When addressed about AI usage, the user replied: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17563150/the-breathing-mountain#post-7502895
To answer your question, yes, I did use AI assistance to my draft. but The concept is mine, but I understand that AI-assisted text isn’t appropriate here, and I won’t be using it going forward. I will rewrite the draft fully in my own words and post. I'm really sorry. and am I gonna get banned? if so, I am sorry.
They then posted another forum thread for the same concept: http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17564358/the-breathing-mountain
Permanently banned, PM sent. Kufat supporting.
