Noting that SirSylent (account age 2015 days, site membership 1820 days) recently coldposted a page, and upon receiving comments, responded to one critique with: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17469715/scp-9449#post-7450388
I can totally understand how those little cracks in the writing can make the reading experience feel off.
The moment you addressed the issues, I realized those holes instantly, and I decided to come up with some small additions to fix them. Let me know if you think this helps remove that slightly annoying feeling.
First of all, the whole questioning process is a really bad security hole. The fix for that could be keeping the host contained for a couple of days, then attempting distant communication, and then doing face-to-face questioning with a D-Class. -> Done.
Second, I’m going to rewrite the description of the ‘Host Procedure’ to add more detail about how the creature reanimates a person. -> Done
The invisibility idea does feel like it comes out of nowhere—you’re right. But the question “What happens if we lock it in a box and leave?” still needs an answer. I think I can change it into something more threatening, not invisibility, but something more grounded and robust. -> Done
I’ll also try to describe the creature in more detail to make it clearer and easier for the reader to visualize. -> just added a few more information about the creature. This should answer more remaining questions.
Let me know if there still some missing things you would like to see in this article. And thank you for your honest feedback.
When asked, "Why did you ChatGPT this", they responded:
Well, i didn't. English is not my native language and i felt like this looked like a good and clear way of addresing the issue. Only thing i use chat gpt for is fixing typo's on my sentences. AND ONLY for that. I don't create any ideas or anything at all.
It feels weird and uncanny that just because I thought it looked clear, it resembled ChatGPT to you.
The page has since been deleted. User's last mainsite activity was in 2022: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14568412/scp-idea-existential-crisis Excerpt:
Okay, I made it a little long, but finally, let me tell you a little about myself and the things I can change if SCP gets greenlight. I myself am an author on an unofficial SCP translation branch on SCP-INT. One of the things I want most is to write my own SCP on the SCP-Wiki.
When I realized that my own thoughts were very interesting and protective of people, I realized that I could transfer this to an SCP and decided to present it to you. Finally, in the future, I can change whether the SCP is humanoid or not.
Permanently banned, PM sent. Kufat, Zoobeeny, nico supporting.