Noting that new site member
CEN_er16 (account age and site membership 1 day) recently posted the following draft critique thread, which links to a sandbox page that has multiple indicators of AI-generation:
Thread description:
First draft critique for an Euclid Samurai General. Containment relies on psychological paralysis via fluid exposure; danger linked to anomalous katana (SCP-XXXX-1). Seeking feedback on tone and class justification.
Thread body:
Hii! This is my first SCP draft. The concept centers on an Edo period samurai general (Euclid) whose containment relies on exposing him to a human-derived fluid, which induces a temporary psychic paralysis linked to a traumatic military defeat. His main danger lies in contact with his anomalous katana (SCP-XXXX-1), which triggers an immediate, devastating event (Incident XXXX-1).
Here u the link: https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/user:cen-ter-scp-take-1
I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback on the tone, the justification for Euclid class, and the overall flow/readability of the report. Thanks so much«
https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/user:cen-ter-scp-take-1 Revision 0 preserved; full draft present in page creation. User later made two edits, to remove a repeat paragraph in the addenda, and to make small corrections.
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**Item #:** SCP-XXXX
**Object Class:** Euclid
**Special Containment Procedures:**
CP-XXXX is to be contained within a standard humanoid containment cell measuring 7m x 7m x 7m. The cell must be constructed of thick, scratch-resistant steel. The cell must be suspended 3 meters above the ground, with a 2m-deep pool of human-derived biological fluid underneath. The cell must be positioned 4m from the perimeter wall, with a retractable bridge leading to the cell entrance. The access door must be 70cm thick, with a sealable transfer slot for the placement of sustenance and requested items. This slot must only be utilized following the observation of SCP-XXXX entering a quiescent state. The door must remain sealed for seven (7) days following any observed aggressive manifestation. Failure to comply with this protocol requires the issuance of a Code Gamma Alert and the evacuation of all Foundation personnel present, followed by the immediate deployment of the assigned Mobile Task Force (MTF).
SCP-XXXX-1 (Katana): This anomalous object must be stored in a separate containment unit away from SCP-XXXX. Should SCP-XXXX and SCP-XXXX-1 come into contact, a High-Risk Restructuring Event may occur. SCP-XXXX-1 must be kept under continuous (24/7) monitoring.
**Description:**
SCP-XXXX is a humanoid entity, measuring approximately 1.97 meters in height, visually resembling a high-ranking Japanese military general from the Edo period. The entity is noted for its long, black hair tied back in a rigid, ceremonial fashion. The entity's face is heavily disfigured by severe burn scarring and deep lacerations, and it wears a traditional samurai armour, designated as part of the entity, which grants it complete immunity to kinetic impact from small-arms ballistics.
Anomalous Physical Properties: SCP-XXXX possesses superhuman physical strength, capable of breaching standard reinforced concrete walls with repeated blunt force trauma within seconds. It also displays exceptional agility, making conventional containment extremely difficult in the event of a breach.
Verbal Interaction and Communication: SCP-XXXX has been observed attempting to communicate with various Foundation researchers and Class-D personnel. However, analysis of these verbal interactions indicates that the entity's speech is highly erratic, non-cohesive, and devoid of discernible linguistic content. No clean or actionable information has ever been retrieved from its vocalizations.
Psychological and Containment Dependence: SCP-XXXX's behaviour is directly affected by the presence of human-derived biological fluid (see Special Containment Procedures). This fluid is theorized to induce a state of temporary psychic paralysis, as it appears to trigger a profound memory related to the subject's military defeat. This state renders the entity completely docile and physically inert for a typical duration of approximately 48 hours.
Addendum XXXX-A: Acquisition and Initial Incident Log
Acquisition: SCP-XXXX was recovered on 26/06/1993 in a unknow dungeon of Okawara Castle, discovered amidst a mass of casualties following a localized armed conflict. Despite the high number of deceased combatants,SCP-XXXX exhibited no signs of biological decomposition and was the sole survivor. exhibiting symptoms consistent with a severe cerebral vascular incident (stroke) and strong, uncontrolled muscular spasms. During transportation to Site-56, the entity maintained a firm grip on a singular katana (SCP-XXXX-1), resisting all attempts at separation.
Incident XXXX-1 (The Catalyst): Following initial containment, a procedural error resulted in SCP-XXXX being contained alongside SCP-XXXX-1. When a Class-D personnel was instructed to interact with SCP-XXXX-1 during a testing protocol, SCP-XXXX was observed to move with instantaneous speed, utilizing SCP-XXXX-1 to cause the disintegration of the Class-D personnel into a mass of biological tissue in a fraction of a second, an event indiscernible to the naked eye. Following this event, SCP-XXXX and SCP-XXXX-1 were immediately separated, establishing the current containment protocols.
Incident XXXX-1 (The Catalyst): Following initial containment, a procedural error resulted in SCP-XXXX being contained alongside SCP-XXXX-1. When a Class-D personnel was instructed to interact with SCP-XXXX-1 during a testing protocol, SCP-XXXX was observed to move with instantaneous speed, utilizing SCP-XXXX-1 to cause the disintegration of the Class-D personnel into a mass of biological tissue in a fraction of a second, an event indiscernible to the naked eye. Following this event, SCP-XXXX and SCP-XXXX-1 were immediately separated, establishing the current containment protocols.
Addendum XXXX-B: Response Protocol to Aggressive Manifestation
If SCP-XXXX is provoked while separated from SCP-XXXX-1, the following destructive chain of events is anticipated: The entity will initiate a state of escalating fury, attempting to breach containment to locate and recover SCP-XXXX-1. During the subsequent seven (7) day period, any direct interaction with the entity is strictly prohibited, as SCP-XXXX will aggressively destroy any object or personnel encountered in its path until SCP-XXXX-1 is recovered, after which it is hypothesized that it would use the object to disintegrate the original aggressor.
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Excerpts of note:
Anomalous Physical Properties: SCP-XXXX possesses superhuman physical strength, capable of breaching standard reinforced concrete walls with repeated blunt force trauma within seconds. It also displays exceptional agility, making conventional containment extremely difficult in the event of a breach.
Verbal Interaction and Communication: SCP-XXXX has been observed attempting to communicate with various Foundation researchers and Class-D personnel. However, analysis of these verbal interactions indicates that the entity's speech is highly erratic, non-cohesive, and devoid of discernible linguistic content. No clean or actionable information has ever been retrieved from its vocalizations.
Psychological and Containment Dependence: SCP-XXXX's behaviour is directly affected by the presence of human-derived biological fluid (see Special Containment Procedures). This fluid is theorized to induce a state of temporary psychic paralysis, as it appears to trigger a profound memory related to the subject's military defeat. This state renders the entity completely docile and physically inert for a typical duration of approximately 48 hours.
Addendum XXXX-A: Acquisition and Initial Incident Log
Acquisition: SCP-XXXX was recovered on 26/06/1993 in a unknow dungeon of Okawara Castle, discovered amidst a mass of casualties following a localized armed conflict. Despite the high number of deceased combatants,SCP-XXXX exhibited no signs of biological decomposition and was the sole survivor. exhibiting symptoms consistent with a severe cerebral vascular incident (stroke) and strong, uncontrolled muscular spasms. During transportation to Site-56, the entity maintained a firm grip on a singular katana (SCP-XXXX-1), resisting all attempts at separation.
Of note, a short Google search indicates no "Okawara Castle" in existence.
Compare with the user's only other forum post: http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17417326/november-2025-intros-explorers#post-7408517
Hello everyone!
I first heard about the SCP Foundation around three years ago, but I only recently rediscovered it this month. I've literally fallen in love with the stories and the concept, and now I'm excited to finally be a member:>
I'm from Italy and my goal is to eventually create and write a new SCP for the site. I hope to get started with some critiques soon.
The only thing that comes close to a supernatural experience might be when I was 13 and I dreamed something that literally happened a week later;)
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