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Hello people I am new to the Scp wiki and want constructive feedback on a goofy ah scp I'm making that I probably won't post unless I can convince myself it's good. I'm gonna just post the story below it's still unfinished and has only been in development for a week. Please no hate, I can handle hate it's just unnecessary and I am perfectly fine with structured criticism. Now remember this is my first work so there are going to be topics that feel like there in the "Top ten most popular SCP tropes." Like reality warping and stuff like that.
(Note: I know most of y'all probably already know this but I'm just going to say this to make sure, the Scp number is labeled as XXXX because I haven't came up with a number, Thx :D)
Item #: SCP-XXXX
Object Class: Euclid
Special Containment Procedures: The entrance to SCP-XXXX is to be maintained under the guise of Outpost-77, a geological research station operated by the Foundation front "Aethelred Mineral Sciences." A 250 km² buffer zone is designated as a █████████-Protected Wilderness Area. Access is to be controlled by a security detail of no less than 12 personnel.
All personnel assigned to SCP-XXXX must hold a Level 3/XXXX security clearance and are subject to a mandatory six-month rotation cycle. Psychological screening is required monthly. Any personnel expressing undue fascination with, or using trigger words including "rocks," "caves," or "crystals" outside of a clinical context will be subject to immediate psychiatric evaluation and probable reassignment.
The primary fissure is to be sealed with a 40-centimeter-thick, hermetically sealed reinforced steel bulkhead (Designation B-77). Exploration by permitted teams of four or more may be authorized, provided they are equipped with standard gear, closed-circuit video transmitters, and Manning-Porter Emergency Transceivers. Exploration is limited to designated Green Zones and must not exceed four (4) hours.
Access to Amber Zones requires dual Level-4 approval. Entry into Red Zones—areas where SCP-XXXX-2C concentrations depress Hume Field readings below 0.85—is strictly prohibited.
All instances of SCP-XXXX-3 are to be housed in individual, sound-absorbent containment chambers at Bio-Containment Site-103. Physical contact with SCP-XXXX-3 instances is a terminal-level risk; all feeding and maintenance must be conducted via automated systems.
Description: SCP-XXXX is an anomalous cave network located within the ██████████ Mountains. The sole known entrance is a natural fissure leading to a primary cavern.
The primary anomalies within the network are classified as SCP-XXXX-2, comprising five distinct crystalline phenotypes:
· SCP-XXXX-2A ("White Singer"): Source of a potent auditory/cognitive hazard, transmitting complex information and inducing vivid, thematic nightmares.
· SCP-XXXX-2B ("Blue Weaver"): Generates localized spatial distortions and non-Euclidean geometry.
· SCP-XXXX-2C ("Grey Watcher"): Emits a constant low-grade reality-altering field, reducing local Hume levels.
· SCP-XXXX-2D ("Amber Prison"): Causes anomalous temporal dilation and distortion.
· SCP-XXXX-2E ("Green Eater"): Interacts with organic matter, inducing rapid calcification and fusion with surrounding mineral structures.
Prolonged exposure to SCP-XXXX-2, particularly SCP-XXXX-2A, results in severe and irreversible psychological degradation. SCP-XXXX came to Foundation attention following the "█████ Incident" (2007), wherein a six-year-old child emerged from the cave system exhibiting catatonia and the physical senescence of a 40-year-old adult. The subject was holding a single specimen of SCP-XXXX-2C.
Addendum XXXX.1: SCP-XXXX-3 Instances
SCP-XXXX-3 is the designation for organisms that have undergone "Sublimation"—irreversible physical and mental alteration via prolonged exposure to active SCP-XXXX-2 crystals. Instances are composite entities of biological and crystalline material, exhibiting distorted physiologies reflective of the dominant crystal's properties.
Notable Instances:
· SCP-XXXX-3-A ("The Vessel"): Formerly D-9341. Subject was exposed to SCP-XXXX-2A for 72 hours. Metamorphosis resulted in a 40% reduction in size and the growth of white, needle-like crystalline structures from the back and ocular cavities. Instance is largely inert but emits a constant low-frequency hum, which induces intense déjà vu and involuntary memory recall in human subjects. It appears to exist in a perpetual dream-state and will, if provided with a granular medium, form complex geometric patterns.
· SCP-XXXX-3-B ("The Stutter"): Formerly D-8820. Subject was exposed to SCP-XXXX-2C. Transformation included severe skeletal deformation, a 35% reduction in height, and the development of a rough, brown crystalline carapace. The instance exists in a state of extreme temporal instability, moving in sudden, violent jerks interspersed with periods of absolute immobility. Its vocalizations are unintelligible in real-time; however, when audio is slowed by 500%, it is revealed to be a recitation of the subject's life history in reverse chronological order.
· SCP-XXXX-3-C ("The Thorn"): Formerly a domestic cat (Felis catus). Subject was exposed to SCP-XXXX-2E. Mutation resulted in the fusion of limbs into short, rigid appendages and encrustation of the body with sharp, green crystalline fibers. The instance is stationary and emits a quiet, perpetual growl. All organic material within a 2-meter radius is gradually drawn toward SCP-XXXX-3-C and absorbed into its crystalline matrix over a 48-hour period.
Addendum XXXX.2: Incident Midas
In 2011, a covert cell of the Chaos Insurgency, operating under the "Midas" directive, infiltrated Foundation communications in an attempt to weaponize the SCP-XXXX-2 Sublimation process.
The cell exposed four political detainees ("Golem Unit Sigma") to a concentrated field of SCP-XXXX-2B and SCP-XXXX-2A. Initial intercepted signals indicated apparent success, with subjects demonstrating the ability to warp local spacetime.
All signals from the cell ceased after two weeks. Final broadcasts described the subjects "unraveling." A Foundation cleanup team found the facility's interior exhibiting severe spatial anomalies. The four test subjects were found fused into a single mass of contorted flesh and blue crystal, perpetually vocalizing a loop of frantic, overlapping dialogue. The amalgamation was designated SCP-XXXX-3-D and destroyed with high-yield explosives.
Addendum XXXX.3: Exploration Log XXXX-E1
Exploration Team: MTF Eta-13 ("Geological Surveyors")
Team Lead: Agent R. Vance
Personnel: Agents Torres, Diaz, Lee
[00:27:45]
Vance: Command, we're at the twenty-meter mark. The walls… they don't match the maps. More crystals than anticipated. Primarily SCP-XXXX-2B and… the white ones, 2A. The topology is inconsistent with the drone scan from last month. Is that… is that the same passage we just came through? It looks narrower.
Torres: Negative, Vance. The main passage is behind us. You're looking at a new formation.
Vance: My inertial compass is… it's not spinning, it's wobbling. Like it can't decide on a vector.
[Audio log registers Agent Vance's breathing rate increasing to 28 breaths per minute. A forty-seven-second silence follows.]
Vance: Found a cluster of SCP-XXXX-2A. I'm moving in for a closer look.
Torres: Do not, Vance. Contact is strictly prohibited by protocol.
Vance: It's… not a visual phenomenon. I can feel it in my teeth. A low hum. Can you hear that? It's like it's… resonating. I'm seeing… patterns. Fractals.
[LOG EXCERPT ENDS]
Aftermath: The team returned to the surface three hours later. Agent Vance was catatonic, clutching a non-anomalous rock and repeatedly muttering, "the stone dreams." He was reassigned to non-field duties.
Addendum XXXX.4: Researcher Profile & Incident Log
Name: Dr. Lucyna B. Aris
Title: Senior Researcher, Anomalous Geological Systems
Personal Log Entry (10/14/2025): "The Midas fools thought they could sculpt a god from dreams and mold it into a tool. They misunderstood the transaction. The crystals do not empower; they consume. What remains is a byproduct—a fossilized spirit. The SCP-XXXX-2B did not grant those men spatial manipulation; the men were spun into space by the crystal. The SCP-XXXX-2A are not transmitting information; they are singing, and our minds are merely faulty radios picking up the signal. We are not the audience. We are the resonance."
Note: Dr. Aris's subsequent request to expand the Amber Zone was denied. Psychological evaluations indicated a growing fixation and heightened sensitivity to the SCP-XXXX-2A cognitohazard. Reassignment was pending.
Incident Log XXXX-A // Unauthorized Entry by Dr. Aris
[03:14] Subject bypasses Bulkhead B-77 security lock.
Dr. Aris: Okay. Okay, Lucy, you can do this. Just… ignore the peristalsis in the rock. The lock is just a lock. My hands—God, they're shaking. There. It's open.
[03:14] Subject enters SCP-XXXX.
Dr. Aris: The air is viscous in here. I can feel the path. It's not on any map. A pressure behind my eyes, pulling me forward. A taut string tied to my optic nerve.
[03:41] Subject traverses Amber Zones with unnatural certainty.
Dr. Aris: All the years of research… we had it backwards. We thought we were studying a location. It's not a place. It's a consciousness. We are microbiota scuttling across its epidermis. Our containment was the height of arrogance.
[04:17] Subject enters a massive, uncharted chamber.
Dr. Aris: Oh, God. I was right. I was right, and I wish I weren't. This is the source. The hum… it's no longer in my ears. It's in my teeth. In my bone marrow. It's a song. I can almost… almost parse the lyrics.
Dr. Aris: It's a cascade now. That boy… he wasn't lost for forty years. He was… sampled. Studied. For a subjective millennium or an objective second—it's congruent in here. He remains, and he is not alone. There are countless others. Echoes. Fossils of thought.
[The audio feed distorts with a resonant hum. Dr. Aris exhales sharply; the sound devolves into a wet, shuddering approximation of laughter.]
Dr. Aris: We've been asking the wrong question. We worry about the contents of the dream… but no one ever asks… what happens when the dreamer wakes?
[Audio transmission terminates. Locator beacon signal lost.]
Aftermath: Dr. Aris's Manning-Porter Transceiver was later discovered embedded within a wall of SCP-XXXX-2E, fossilized as if for millennia. The crystal emits a low-level auditory cognitohazard. All Red Zones have been designated permanently inaccessible.
Excerpts of note:
Special Containment Procedures: The entrance to SCP-XXXX is to be maintained under the guise of Outpost-77, a geological research station operated by the Foundation front "Aethelred Mineral Sciences." A 250 km² buffer zone is designated as a █████████-Protected Wilderness Area. Access is to be controlled by a security detail of no less than 12 personnel.
Psychological screening is required monthly. Any personnel expressing undue fascination with, or using trigger words including "rocks," "caves," or "crystals" outside of a clinical context will be subject to immediate psychiatric evaluation and probable reassignment.
Exploration by permitted teams of four or more may be authorized, provided they are equipped with standard gear, closed-circuit video transmitters, and Manning-Porter Emergency Transceivers.
Access to Amber Zones requires dual Level-4 approval. Entry into Red Zones—areas where SCP-XXXX-2C concentrations depress Hume Field readings below 0.85—is strictly prohibited.
The primary anomalies within the network are classified as SCP-XXXX-2, comprising five distinct crystalline phenotypes:
· SCP-XXXX-2A ("White Singer"): Source of a potent auditory/cognitive hazard, transmitting complex information and inducing vivid, thematic nightmares.
Addendum XXXX.1: SCP-XXXX-3 Instances
SCP-XXXX-3 is the designation for organisms that have undergone "Sublimation"—irreversible physical and mental alteration via prolonged exposure to active SCP-XXXX-2 crystals. Instances are composite entities of biological and crystalline material, exhibiting distorted physiologies reflective of the dominant crystal's properties.
Compare with author note at start of draft:
Hello people I am new to the Scp wiki and want constructive feedback on a goofy ah scp I'm making that I probably won't post unless I can convince myself it's good. I'm gonna just post the story below it's still unfinished and has only been in development for a week. Please no hate, I can handle hate it's just unnecessary and I am perfectly fine with structured criticism. Now remember this is my first work so there are going to be topics that feel like there in the "Top ten most popular SCP tropes." Like reality warping and stuff like that.
(Note: I know most of y'all probably already know this but I'm just going to say this to make sure, the Scp number is labeled as XXXX because I haven't came up with a number, Thx :D)
Of note, user has a second sandbox page with the same content, which was later blanked: http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/fisrt-scp page title "Fisrt scp"
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