Noting that new site member
Soulless16 (account age 409 days, site membership 1 day) recently coldposted two low-quality pages, and upon receiving negative feedback, proceeded to respond vehemently to the readers:
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/d-0404
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Start report
MARCH 12 2016. 12:00pm
D-0404 was pushed into the same room with SCP-035. Almost immediately dark thoughts began dripping into the mind of D-0404. Tho D-0404 showed no signs of being manipulated. He began to ask the mask questions, only to be cut off by a blaring alarm. A massive system failure let out a multitude of SCP. All of which began to try and escape. The personnel watching D-0404 and SCP-035 quickly fled. Leaving them both unmonitored. D-0404, seeing a moment of opportunity grabbed SCP-035. Letting it's black ooze drip onto his hand. Causing a massive amount of pain and burns. Of course whenever there's pain, there's SCP-106. He crawled through the wall, looking for the source of that, sweet, sweet agony. He was quickly met by a tackle from D-0404. SCP-106 tumbled back into his pocket dimension, with D-0404 as well as SCP-035. The floor disappeared with SCP-035 and D-0404 falling down into a lake of boiling acid. Tho the acid did not physically harm them, they still felt it as if it was real. SCP-106 laughed as this, no one ever had the guts to fight him in his own realm. D-0404 clawed himself up onto a sharp rock that was sticking out in the middle of the acid lake. He stared up at SCP-106 with absolute malice.
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17164868/d-0404#post-7065767 post title "Creator commentary"
Hello chat. This was my second post on scp wiki. Of course it isn't a masterpiece, I'm still learning how to naturally progress stories. If you see any typos are misspellings that's just because I'm lowkey dumb. I do want to do more with D-0404 since he is he baby and I love him. But I want people to actually care about him. Or else I'll just be the annoying person shoving their OC in everyone's face. Ok bye :)
Reader comment:
| This has a LOT of SPaG errors present, some pretty fundamental to the point where I can tell you didn't really review this yourself before posting. Beyond those, this is a lot of bland, unengaging exposition where we basically see a lot of "they went here, they did this" over and over without much else. To really engage your reader in a story, you can't just tell them things happened. You need to actually show it happening with descriptive prose. Paint a scene, show us what's going on. |
| In the future you should really get feedback from other site members before posting. I'm glad you care about your character and are excited to post, but rushing to post will only result in your article getting downvoted and, eventually, deleted. |
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17164868/d-0404#post-7066011 user reply to above
Have you considered that you just don't like joy and whimsy?
Reader comment:
| This feels like having a video game playthrough narrated at me, picking up key items and running into (conveniently) only big name SCPs rated over 1000. I'd strongly encourage not only utilizing the drafting and critique resources on this site, but reading some new tales and articles to get a feel for the kinds of stories popular on here nowadays. |
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17164868/d-0404#post-7065999 user reply to above
So I'm guessing you'd like to read a story with scp 7330941 aka mister giggleshitter that no one has ever heard about
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-8396
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Object class: Safe i think or maybe it's Euclid
containment procedures: SCP-8396, or is it SCP-8369? no no it's definitely SCP-8396… I think. Oh God they're going to dock my pay i suck at this!
System Override
SCP-8396 is to be kept in a 5 millimetre thick glass box surrounded by 14 millimetre tungsten plates. Personnel are to not bring any weapons, medication, or other SCP within 50 meter's of SCP-8396
Description: SCP-8396 is a 9 millimetre tall, or was it wide? Maybe it's both. But then how could it be 5 millimetres wide as well? Whatever its measurements are i know absolutely that it is a plush spinosaurus. No wait, it's a baryonyx. Wait no it has the spine so it has to be a spinosaurus!
Reader comment
| This is a concept that's already been done at least a handful of times, and this does nothing to innovate on the idea. There's some potential in a computer system providing the "true" story in contrast to a human narrator falling prey to a memetic hazard, but this only really uses that idea to explain the joke to us before the joke can even build up any momentum. |
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17164929/scp-8396#post-7065916 user reply to above
Anything as big as scp has had stuff done multiple time's
Further note, the user created a new sandbox page after the discussions occurred: https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/d-0404-rough-file there are no edits beyond page creation. The full text is as follows:
Scp-fuck
Containment in a massive bag of shit and piss at site whatever.
Guy comes in. Doesn't find it because that would be too convenient
Gets shot
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You guys need more joy
Given all the above, I've revoked their membership. PM sent.