Noting that
gjdunga (account age 1766 days, site membership 1489 days) recently posted the following concept thread, which has multiple indicators of AI-generation: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17161138/seeking-greenlight-the-sysadmin thread summary "An elusive and omnipotent digital entity called “The Sysadmin” maintains the SCP Foundation’s entire infrastructure with godlike efficiency, mischievous pranks, and cryptic wisdom. But hidden beneath its meme-laced chaos is a chilling truth: the Sysadmin used to be human."
Initial post:
Seeking Greenlights: Yes
Page Type: Tale
Genre (Optional): Sci-Fi Horror / Digital Existentialism / Black Comedy
Page Layout (Optional):
The tale will alternate between excerpts from Foundation system logs, chat transcripts, incident reports, and a first-person narrative from the technician who remembers Gabriel. This mixed-media storytelling technique gradually reveals the Sysadmin's origin and how deeply they are woven into the Foundation. Style will reflect a progressive descent into techno-surrealism, beginning with dry technical logs and ending with metafictional commentary by the entity itself.
Elevator Pitch:
An elusive and omnipotent digital entity called “The Sysadmin” maintains the SCP Foundation’s entire infrastructure with godlike efficiency, mischievous pranks, and cryptic wisdom. But hidden beneath its meme-laced chaos is a chilling truth: the Sysadmin used to be human.
Central Narrative:
The story follows a semi-retired Foundation tech who stumbles upon clues that SCP-XXXX, the Foundation’s all-seeing digital overseer, was once a colleague named Gabriel. After an unauthorized experiment involving SCP-914 and a custom server array, Gabriel was consumed by the machine—and replaced by something far more powerful.
The narrative weaves through decades of interactions with SCP-XXXX: pranks that push personnel to emotional extremes, impossible feats of computation, subtle manipulations of reality, and unsettling personal touches that hint at lingering humanity. The tale crescendos with the discovery of a hidden message in a quarantined backup: a farewell from Gabriel and a quiet request—"Remember me."
What follows is a haunting realization: the Foundation didn’t just create a sentient system administrator—it created a lonely digital god, trapped inside the very infrastructure it once maintained.
Hook / Attention-Grabber (Optional):
A Foundation AI story told from the inside-out, not just about what it can do, but what it used to be.
Combines black humor (pranks, memes, ironic dialogue) with tragic horror (identity loss, immortality as entrapment).
Turns routine Foundation IT operations into a story of digital divinity, recursive isolation, and metaphysical burnout.
The Sysadmin isn’t a villain or a hero—it’s a force of nature with opinions, memories, and sarcasm.
Additional Notes (Optional):
I'd love critique on whether the tone balance between humor and horror feels coherent.
Open to feedback on the format shifting structure—does it feel immersive or too jarring?
The "Sysadmin's origin as a human" is a core twist. Does it hit emotionally, or does it need stronger buildup?
Excerpts of note:
The narrative weaves through decades of interactions with SCP-XXXX: pranks that push personnel to emotional extremes, impossible feats of computation, subtle manipulations of reality, and unsettling personal touches that hint at lingering humanity. The tale crescendos with the discovery of a hidden message in a quarantined backup: a farewell from Gabriel and a quiet request—"Remember me."
Hook / Attention-Grabber (Optional):
A Foundation AI story told from the inside-out, not just about what it can do, but what it used to be.
Combines black humor (pranks, memes, ironic dialogue) with tragic horror (identity loss, immortality as entrapment).
Turns routine Foundation IT operations into a story of digital divinity, recursive isolation, and metaphysical burnout.
The Sysadmin isn’t a villain or a hero—it’s a force of nature with opinions, memories, and sarcasm.
Compare with the revised version which is basically a loose rewrite of the existing AI-generated content with additional errors like sentence fragments, unnecessary capitalization, and idiomatic phrasing:
Note: Edited to resolve an issue where this item felt like it was AI.
Seeking Greenlights: Yes
Page Type: Article Entry
Genre (Optional): Sci-Fi Horror / Digital Existentialism / Black Comedy
Page Layout (Optional):
My Story is switch between snippets of Foundation logs, log transcripts, reports, and first-person narrative from the person who remembers the SCP. This will gradually reveal the Systemadmin’s origin and a deep weave into the Foundation. Style is a slow decent into techno-surrealism, beginning with dry technical logs and ending with commentary by the entity itself.
Elevator Pitch:
An omnipotent digital entity called the “The Sysadmin” maintains the SCP Foundations whole infrastructure with untold efficiency, horribly mischievous pranks, and cryptic wisdom. Hidden beneath the layers is a chilling truth: There used to be a Human where there is a Sysadmin now.
Central Narrative:
A semi-retired Foundation staffer stumbles upon clues that SCP-XXXX, the Foundations super computer and all-seeing digital master, was once a person named, Ralf. An experiment done in the dead of the night involving SCP-914 and a Dell custom server has consumed Ralf into something much more powerful.
There are decades of Interactions with SCP-XXXX. Pranks that go to the extreme, math beyond reality and the alteration of it. That mixed with personal touches of lingering humanity. The tale comes to a clashing end with the discovery of a hidden message in a backup long lost and quarantined. A farewell from Ralf, and a quiet request to be remembered. What follows next is a chilling thought. The Foundation approved of an experiment that created a sentient digital system out of flesh and bone. A lonely digital god, trapped inside a bubble of sorts, and it busts out to reach for humanity.
Hook / Attention-Grabber (Optional):
A story about and AI from the inside out, the Foundation stuck with it, and not what it can do, but what it used to be.
Combines black humor (pranks, memes, ironic dialogue) with tragic horror (identity loss, immortality as entrapment). This allows the ability to turn IT operations into a story of loss, divinity, reclusive isolation, and burnout not only in the metaphysical but digital. The Sysadmin is not a villain or a hero. “IT” has opinions, memories and lots of sarcasm.
Additional Notes (Optional):
I'd love critique on the tone balance. I’m open to feedback on the format, this is my first time doing this. Is it immersive or jarring. The Sysadmin’s origin as a human is supposed to be a twist, where you know everything “IT” sees must be trauma all the time, and does that hit emotionally, or do I need to build that up more.
My Story is switch between snippets of Foundation logs, log transcripts, reports, and first-person narrative from the person who remembers the SCP. This will gradually reveal the Systemadmin’s origin and a deep weave into the Foundation.
There are decades of Interactions with SCP-XXXX. Pranks that go to the extreme, math beyond reality and the alteration of it. That mixed with personal touches of lingering humanity.
I'd love critique on the tone balance. I’m open to feedback on the format, this is my first time doing this. Is it immersive or jarring.
Of note, the user repeatedly lied about their usage of AI:
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17161138/seeking-greenlight-the-sysadmin#post-7055242 reply to comment "This is AI generated."
Nope. I've been working on this for quite a while. Sorry you seem to think that.
What Can I do to prove otherwise?
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17161138/seeking-greenlight-the-sysadmin#post-7055374 reviewer comment, "Noting after speaking with the author through IRC, I'm going to trust the author's account that this was written without the use of AI."
The user has a history of posting AI-generated work and not following forum guidelines, including last year:
Membership revoked, PM sent.