AI Record - RealPapaya

Summary:

Posted obvious AI "crit" to Discord, also AI-generated drafts in forum threads. Extraneous subheadings, unnecessary bolded text, extraneous abilities list

AI Record - RealPapaya

Zyn 17 Apr 2025 06:28

Noting that RealPapaya (account age 230 days) recently received a membership revocation for posting the following AI-generated feedback in the Discord:

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I really enjoyed your draft, nice work!
Here are my toughts:
**What I Liked:**

**Innovative Concept:** The idea of a mechanical entity that creates hostile duplicates of sentient beings is both intriguing and original. It adds an unique twist to the typical SCP narrative.

**Integration with Established Lore:**
 Tying SCP-XXXX to Anderson Robotics enriches the story by connecting it to existing SCP universe elements, providing depth and context.

**Clear Containment and Description Sections:** The containment procedures and description are well-structured, making it easy to understand the nature and threat level of SCP-XXXX.

**Areas you could Improve:**

**Clinical Tone:** While the draft maintains a generally clinical tone, there are instances where the language could be more formal. For example, phrases like "SCP-XXXX was first sighted in Inari, Finland..." could be rephrased to maintain a more impersonal tone, such as "The initial recorded appearance of SCP-XXXX occurred in Inari, Finland...".​

**Ending and Narrative Closure:** The article ends somewhat abruptly after mentioning the deaths resulting from SCP-XXXX's raids. Providing more details about its neutralization or the aftermath would offer a more satisfying conclusion and justify the time invested in reading.​

**Suggestions for Enhancement:**

**Expand on the Neutralization Process:** Detailing how SCP-XXXX was neutralized would add depth to the narrative and provide closure.​

**Clarify Anomalous Abilities:** Elaborating on how SCP-XXXX creates duplicates and teleports could enhance the reader's understanding and the article's scientific plausibility within the SCP universe.​

**Proofreading:** A thorough review for grammatical consistency and adherence to SCP formatting standards would improve the overall quality.

Overall, your draft presents a compelling concept with strong ties to existing SCP lore. With some refinements in tone, narrative closure, and detail, it has the potential to be a standout entry.

Excerpt of note:

Suggestions for Enhancement:

Expand on the Neutralization Process: Detailing how SCP-XXXX was neutralized would add depth to the narrative and provide closure.​

Clarify Anomalous Abilities: Elaborating on how SCP-XXXX creates duplicates and teleports could enhance the reader's understanding and the article's scientific plausibility within the SCP universe.​

Proofreading: A thorough review for grammatical consistency and adherence to SCP formatting standards would improve the overall quality.

Overall, your draft presents a compelling concept with strong ties to existing SCP lore. With some refinements in tone, narrative closure, and detail, it has the potential to be a standout entry.

Of note, they also have three forum threads, all of which have full drafts in the post, all of which are AI-generated:

• https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16943451/seeking-green-lights-make-sure-to-tell-me-what-you-like-disl
• https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16943452/seeking-green-lights-make-sure-to-tell-me-what-you-like-disl
• https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16930023/scp-6758-the-amethyst-core

Excerpts of note:

Origin
SCP-6758 originates from an amethyst cave in northern Siberia, Russia. It was discovered consuming amethyst ores and only noticed when it grew to 1 meter height, 3 meters wide and 3 meters length. A local miner encountered it on January 22, 1990.

Abilities:

Amethyst Manipulation: SCP-XXXX can manipulate amethyst, creating molten amethyst that can kill or trap its targets. During a containment breach in 1998, it killed seven MTF members by spitting molten amethyst and trapped 15 others inside a giant crystal.

Growth by Consumption: SCP-XXXX grows by consuming external amethyst sources. While it can eat any element, only amethyst enables it to increase in size.

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Re: AI Record - RealPapaya

Zyn 19 Apr 2025 05:58

Re-applied, rejoined site.