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KaylaUnbound (account age 2 days, site membership 1 days) recently coldposted the following concept thread, which has multiple indicators of AI-generation: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17083426/seeking-greenlight-the-forgotten-sign
Summary:
A young girl is taken into Foundation custody after manifesting strange powers that align with the Zodiac. As she grows, her abilities evolve in sync with the stars—but her emotional bond with her handler is the only thing keeping her stable. When the Foundation removes that bond, she begins to change into something cosmic—and no longer human.
Seeking Greenlights: Yes
Page Type: SCP Article
Genre (Optional): Horror, Drama/Emotional, Cosmic, Action
Page Layout (Optional):
Structured as a standard SCP article with progressively darker and more complex addenda. Includes logs, internal memos, psychological evaluations, breach reports, O5 transcripts, and cross-anomaly effects. Ends with a transmission from deep space and a final classification update. A supplemental tale or dossier may follow to expand on themes of transcendence and identity.
Elevator Pitch:
A young girl, taken in after displaying mysterious powers tied to celestial phenomena, is studied and shaped into a weapon by the Foundation. As her connection to the stars deepens, she begins to evolve into something not even the Foundation can control—or understand.
Central Narrative:
This article explores the life of a girl whose abilities expand annually, each one linked to astrological traits. Her emotional states influence manifestations of fire, gravity, water, and psychic phenomena. A handler forms a strong emotional bond with her, grounding her humanity and keeping the entity stable. When the handler is reassigned by higher authority, the girl begins to unravel—emotionally and cosmically. She fuses powers, defies control phrases, and ultimately transcends containment entirely, leaving behind a symbol never seen in the sky before. A final deep-space message reveals she has not been destroyed, but has become something else: a force, a myth, a constellation in motion.
Hook/Attention-Grabber (Optional):
The story is not just about power—it’s about identity, memory, and the cost of being shaped into something unnatural. The anomalous effects serve an emotional arc rather than just a spectacle. Other SCPs begin to dream of her. Even reality-bending entities fear her. She doesn’t escape… she ascends.
Additional Notes (Optional):
Looking for feedback on tone, pacing, and whether the emotional bond between the subject and her handler feels earned. Also open to advice on balancing clinical SCP tone with character-driven storytelling.
Excerpts of note:
Page Layout (Optional):
Structured as a standard SCP article with progressively darker and more complex addenda. Includes logs, internal memos, psychological evaluations, breach reports, O5 transcripts, and cross-anomaly effects. Ends with a transmission from deep space and a final classification update. A supplemental tale or dossier may follow to expand on themes of transcendence and identity.
Central Narrative:
This article explores the life of a girl whose abilities expand annually, each one linked to astrological traits. Her emotional states influence manifestations of fire, gravity, water, and psychic phenomena. A handler forms a strong emotional bond with her, grounding her humanity and keeping the entity stable. When the handler is reassigned by higher authority, the girl begins to unravel—emotionally and cosmically. She fuses powers, defies control phrases, and ultimately transcends containment entirely, leaving behind a symbol never seen in the sky before. A final deep-space message reveals she has not been destroyed, but has become something else: a force, a myth, a constellation in motion.
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Hi I'm Kayla but friends call me Kay. I have always read SCPs and wanted to start getting into writing my own.
My favorite takeout is any pasta.
I am a big Minecraft gamer and I do some coding.
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