AI Record - bluebirdparadise

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AI Record - bluebirdparadise

Zyn 26 Sep 2024 07:17

Noting that bluebirdparadise (account age and site membership 1 day) recently posted the following comment on someone's low-rated SCP article: http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-8906/comments/show#post-6667614

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1. D-Class Checkups:
So, regarding checkups, there is quite a specific routine that D-Class personnel conduct. They have to visually inspect the containment chamber for damage or wear first. They then need to check for structural integrity-the walls being solid and the door likewise not featuring slits or gaps sufficient for SCP-8096 to pass through. They may be required to document changes in appearance or behaviour of the gas.
2. Tone:
We want to keep this formal and exact. Where it says that SCP-8096 is "sneaking up," we might rephrase as being "approached silently." We just need to maintain clear professional language throughout the entire entry.

3. Ideally, we'd expand upon the behavior of SCP-8096-say through chart or response table.
4 Incident Logs:
Let's be more descriptive about the incident logs. Every log should have in it the date and time the incident happened, where in the facility it took place, and who was involved with it. We should also describe what occurred directly after the incident occurred, to include if they changed any procedures or did any direct assessments. Let's not forget to note if there is any follow-up monitoring or research that comes from it.
5. Testing Information:
We could at least name any testing conducted with SCP-8096, even if they didn't really tell us anything. For example, were attempts made to scan the gas composition of it? Did we study how it reacts to elemental iron? We would need only to account for all such experiments, whether they succeeded or not.
6. Summary and Recommendations:
Lastly, just summarize what we've learned thus far about SCP-8096. Maybe make some recommendations for future processing, such as being more careful with electronic devices around it and observing its behavior for any changes. i hope that helped you

Particularly of note is the section, "Let's be more descriptive about the incident logs. Every log should have in it the date and time the incident happened, where in the facility it took place, and who was involved with it. We should also describe what occurred directly after the incident occurred, to include if they changed any procedures or did any direct assessments. Let's not forget to note if there is any follow-up monitoring or research that comes from it."

Compare other comments from them on their own coldposted work: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-8091

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http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-8091/comments/show#post-6667561

Thank you for reading the article, if anyone would like to add, remove or revise SCP-8091 please do.

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-8091/comments/show#post-6667570

I forgot to edit this but SCP-8091 has no defined tune and is the tune of the favorite song of the person listening. thanks for visiting here!

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-8091/comments/show#post-6667608

Oh I just released this and there's already 2 dislikes. If I improve this they won't come back to change their rating would, now would they?