Noting that IHearVoices (account age and site membership 2 days) has been posting some generic feedback in the forums:
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16433972/discussion-for-new-scp#post-6236627
Hi, I am not a critter, but I want to give you some advice on the first draft. This seems more like a tale than an SCP, though you could still use it. I feel like you could create an SCP File and then use this as a tale. Don't take this advice to heart though as I am not a critter, nor a greenlighter. It seems cool though, so keep writing. :D
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16433981/seeking-greenlights-the-soul-of-cold#post-6236658
I skimmed this and it looks pretty cool. You have my upvote. Yeah, I went there, sue me.
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16434102/my-first-scp-idea#post-6236754
This is a really cool idea, and it's probably very likely to work as Murphy's Law is very interesting. The thing is it has been done in other articles, so just read some of those first so you don't end up with someone calling you a copier. I would recommend looking through some of the 7kon articles to make sure. I am excited to see this concept so good luck!
P.S. Read some of Zyn's things for proper formatting.
This seems like a fun SCP. Though why do I picture a plush brown bear, hmmm… who knows ;)? I hope you have a good time writing and you have my +1!
PS: I am not a green lighter.
As these were all posted today, might need to keep an eye on.