Disciplinary - Phoenix Rose / Dr Murphy 3

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Crit forum spam

Disciplinary - Phoenix Rose

OriTiefling 27 Oct 2022 14:40

Posting with permission from the Disciplinary Team.

Phoenix Rose does not match any existing user name was observed making several rulebreaking posts to the critique forums. The user was staffposted with several reminders of the forum guidelines. The user was revoked by ManyMeats.

Re: Disciplinary - Phoenix Rose / Dr Murphy 3

Zyn 28 Oct 2022 06:37

Noting that they've changed their username to Dr Murphy 3 and attempted to re-join the site with an application that did not meet criteria:

username:dr Murphy 3 about: im just some stranger on the internet that likes to cosplay and write about scps lol

Re: Disciplinary - Phoenix Rose / Dr Murphy 3

OriTiefling 30 Oct 2022 13:57

Noting that they posted a concept thread that once again did not use the required template, as well as posting a Google Docs link. https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15343844/ok-so-i-have-been-working-and-i-have-an-idea

Re: Disciplinary - Phoenix Rose / Dr Murphy 3

Zyn 13 Nov 2022 08:10

Noting that they've posted low-effort feedback and been staffposted on: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15374875/seeking-feedback-hiraeth-and-the-land-of-my-fathers#post-5711740

bro you are over prepared you have basicaly writen the entire scp log like im suprised even if this is not new it shocks me so in my opinion is it good like i think its good enought to be able to post

As well as, later in the month: http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15418735/seeking-greenlight-the-memorybook#post-5736021

there is little no information of an anomaly at all, another problem is that this idea is very boring and has no flair which makes it likly to fail. My help is that figure out what the article is about and give it maybe a debt of interest also if i were you give it a history and why the scp foundation wants it and then ask for a reviewer then post and pray that it holds up but you are far from that so what i recommend you do now is think of an idea and how to make the way you write the artice ( not the anomaly as its probably been done before) interesting.

good luck

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Re: Disciplinary - Phoenix Rose / Dr Murphy 3

Zyn 21 Dec 2022 07:55

They've returned to posting low-effort feedback. Once again staffposted: http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15470337/the-demon-core#post-5773132

for the grammar and punctuation use Grammarly

anyways yeah umm for the clinical tone i dont know what you wanted but the idea is very unoriginal so the way you write it will be important as that will make your writing entertaining

yeah

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15467096/hypnophobia#post-5771977

I HAVE TO WRITE THIS FOR THE 3RD TIME AAAAA

So your flow sounds like discord chat as it sounds like a human is writing but not talking in real life and that's not the best. Also pacing is fine I did not look at the consistency I'm sorry it's not as big as it was supposed to I got tired of re-writing this ok?!? anyways is it engaging, its good but could get better but it drags a bit but its neceary

anyways yeah its bad i wrote this for the 3rd time I'm sorry

ETA: sent the user a PM telling them to be more conscientious with their reviews, and that further infractions may result in disciplinary action.

Last edited on 21 Dec 2022 08:00 by Zyn Show more