Chat user Vijfsnippervijf (Wikidot: Vijfsnippervijf (7460258); hostmask: SCP-shnl98.v4.ziggo.nl) has been banned from #thecritters for a week following repeated impatience/disruptive behaviour and refusal to listen to critique or respect reviewers' boundaries. Log from today is recorded below:
[14:09:28] <Vijfsnippervijf> Hello! I'm currently seeking greenlights on this SCp article idea: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14209636/seeking-greenlight-a-virus-that-reverse-ages-subjects
[14:09:34] <Vijfsnippervijf> Anyone there?
[14:09:41] <TawnyOwlJones> not to dispute moo's crit, but i'd like a chance to crit the current version of your idea before you change anything. iirc this wasn't an issue i recognised in the previous version and i want to form my own perspective. being opposed to the foundation is not inherently pro- or antagonistic, and protagonists don't inherently have to be likeable
[14:09:47] <TawnyOwlJones> DrSoulDen: i type lots
[14:09:57] <TawnyOwlJones> Vijfsnippervijf: yes, this chat is active rn
[14:11:19] <Vijfsnippervijf> All right! TameyOwlJones Do you have any questions?
[14:11:29] <Vijfsnippervijf> @TameyOwlJones
[14:11:45] <TawnyOwlJones> i'm not critiquing your idea right now; my requests are closed.
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[14:12:29] <TawnyOwlJones> you can tab fill usernames by typing the first few letters and then pressing tab
[14:12:32] <Vijfsnippervijf> Anyone else here to greenlight?
[14:12:35] <Vijfsnippervijf> TawnyOwlJones: Sorry
[14:12:40] <DetectiveDelta> Er, so what should I do then?
[14:13:26] <TawnyOwlJones> Vijfsnippervijf: you don't need to be sorry, but i have told you multiple times over the past several days that i am not critting your idea. please listen to your reviewers.
[14:13:30] <Vijfsnippervijf> Well, DetectiveDelta Can you greenlight the idea, or do you have any questions?
[14:13:40] <TawnyOwlJones> DetectiveDelta: give me a couple minutes, i'm just reading over it again
[14:14:00] <DetectiveDelta> Nah I can't
[14:14:29] <DetectiveDelta> I'm just a humble writer
[14:15:37] <DrSoulDen> DetectiveDelta: fun fact, getting 3 successful articles out gives you greenlight prvis
[14:16:04] <DetectiveDelta> I have gotten exactly 0 out
[14:16:09] <Vijfsnippervijf> Is anyone here to greenlight my idea? Anyone?
[14:17:11] <DrSoulDen> Vijfsnippervijf: if no one is here who wants to rn, just leave a link
[14:17:37] <Vijfsnippervijf> https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14209636/seeking-greenlight-a-virus-that-reverse-ages-subjects
[14:18:46] <DrSoulDen> a summary of the idea would also be good
[14:19:50] <Vijfsnippervijf> Well, the idea is about a virus that turns adults over age 50 into children age 4-14.
[14:20:22] <TawnyOwlJones> DetectiveDelta: okay so moo's crit doesn't actually play into mine so he's off the hook lol. you can go ahead and change stuff whenever. i do want to raise concern that this dude is quite GOC 2.0 and i'm not sure that having "person that kills skips" is much different from "thing that kills you". the rest is good, although if you're planning on
[14:20:26] <TawnyOwlJones> using religious undertones i'd like to see a bit more of it, rather than just a single reference. remember to be respectful about people's religions.
[14:20:34] <TawnyOwlJones> Vijfsnippervijf: have you read cyvstvi's crit?
[14:21:26] <Vijfsnippervijf> Well, I've actually completely rewritten the idea from back when cyvistvi critted.
[14:22:07] <DetectiveDelta> Yes of course, I definitely wouldn't want to offend anyone
[14:22:23] <DetectiveDelta> I don't want to specifically name any native groups for that reason
[14:22:49] <Mooagain> Why have it do weird stuff to religious people at all?
[14:23:06] <Vijfsnippervijf> TawnyOwlJones: Did you understand what I said?
[14:23:08] <DetectiveDelta> Because I want it to be man made?
[14:23:15] <TawnyOwlJones> Vijfsnippervijf: yes, but it's still a virus, which was cyvstvi's main concern.
[14:24:10] <Mooagain> DetectiveDelta how does that translate to religion
[14:24:10] <DrSoulDen> viruses are overplayed and pretty cliche
[14:24:18] <Vijfsnippervijf> O, yes, that's the intention. But today, it is less about what it is, and more about the narrative. I greatly improved on the narrative side.
[14:24:36] <Vijfsnippervijf> DrSoulDen: I know, so I try to add a narrative that makes it interesting.
[14:24:57] <DetectiveDelta> That translates to religion because it has to do with sacrifice and also because of the anomalous effects having to do with religion
[14:25:17] <DetectiveDelta> It also fits with the appearance of the object e
[14:26:04] <TawnyOwlJones> Vijfsnippervijf: maybe so, but viruses are still overdone. ultimately it's just "everybody turns into children"; so what? how does the foundation react to that? they clearly haven't fully contained the skip by the end
[14:26:25] <Vijfsnippervijf> Wait a second…..
[14:27:10] <DetectiveDelta> And alright, thanks for the critiques Owl
[14:27:45] <TawnyOwlJones> np. i would leave more on the thread but i don't really have more to say yet. it's certainly getting there though
[14:28:10] <DetectiveDelta> I'm not sure what to do to make it good enough honestly :â€)
[14:28:16] <Vijfsnippervijf> Well, it just takes a bit of time to read even 400 words. TawnyOwlJones, please have a closer look.
[14:29:34] <Mooagain> DetectiveDelta do you want the detective to be the main character?
[14:29:41] <DrSoulDen> they literally just said they arent taking requests .__.
[14:29:46] <Vijfsnippervijf> And, in addition, to everyone except Owl: Is anyone else interested?
[14:30:23] <TawnyOwlJones> Vijfsnippervijf: don't insult my intelligence. i'm pretty sure i can read, and i have in fact read your ideas thread multiple times since you posted the link at the beginning of this conversation. i said i wasn't taking requests, and yet i have offered you crit anyway which you chose to ignore.
[14:30:51] <DetectiveDelta> I don't think he needs to be the main character
[14:30:59] Quits: Emmett360 (REMOVED) (The Lounge - By https://thelounge.chat)
[14:31:01] <Vijfsnippervijf> Sorry about that. TawnyOwlJones, I will leave you alone for a moment.
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