ShadyApples does not match any existing user name (W: 1st Mar | S: 2nd Mar) has been leaving some poor critique on the forums. Examples below.
They posted the following on http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14022203/scp:international-phonetic-anomaly#post-4920420:
Alright, I really like the concept of your SCP! it's very interesting that when you try and draw the glyphs on the skeleton and the wall it transforms in the very same substance on the wall and skeleton.
your Attention-Grabber was extremely good in words I especially liked that. But I think it would be best to describe the cave a little bit more, and I also think you should have an interview with the subject who found the SCP. like more of the general questions such as: "where were you when you found the cave" "what were you doing" "what time was it" and other interview questions.
They posted the following on http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14022897/pure-necrophobia#post-4920592:
Alrighty so first of all I like how you included a lot of detail in the effect the SCP has on you, but don't put too much detail into the effects it has on you because the reader will most likely get bored of that. I really like your wording in your paragraphs. and when you say "Higher-ups" you should refer to local police and other stuff like that including the military. when you talk about it being difficult to contain you could just say that the foundation evacuated the village and gave them anesthetics. but over all it is a good concept.
And on http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14023401/execution-with-excel#post-4920803 they posted the following:
Alrighty, so this is a very neat concept and I really think it is pretty cool, it's really creative and pretty scary. but overall I think it is great and don't doubt yourself.
I have staffposted the last one of these. Keep an eye on.
ETA: they have a disc thread here: http://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-14024747/disciplinary-shadyapples ~cybersqyd
