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MrCrompsky, (W: 358 days | S: 328 days) has posted a lot of poor critique, all of which had to be staff posted.
- Poor Crit
From http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13891955/twinportation
Hello! (Not a greenlighter)
Your SCP seems like a “thing that does a thing” witch is generally frowned upon in the ideas forum. I suggest you add some story to it to make it more appealing.
From http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13891959/a-balkan-fairy-tail
I think this would work much better as a SCP tale because an article wouldn’t really convey the story as well.
From http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13893932/scp-idea:nightmare-pillow
(Not a greenlighter)
like the idea, but your idea is good, but the pillow seems pointless. “Weird dreams” seem a bit empty. Maybe try to elaborate on this railroad business
From http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13893788/scp-idea:pinular-gas
(Not a greenlighter)
You need to tell us where the gas came from, and maybe add a story from that.