New user grockstar124 has recently given some unhelpful feedback on the forums, including:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-1022143/my-scp-draft#post-2109764
That's up to you.
I had a idea with fertility statues, and it was crap. Literally crap.
So I am working on something else, which I'll post tomorrow.
If you think it could work, make it work.
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-1022539/my-first-scp#post-2109777
Most of the errors is grammar, like you said.
I: You don't need to write "SCP-2046 is to be in containment at all times."
II: Replace the at automated drone with a.
III: Try not to refer to SCPs and their instances as he or she, unless it is important.
Good idea, needs a bit of work with grammar and other things like that. Keep working on it.
Given that on their own draft thread they stated "Before you scream at me later, this is my first SCP, and my attempt is horrible and needs major help, so please give me ideas, not scream THIS IS TERRIBLE!!!", I'm a little wary of this guy. I haven't done an official staff post yet, but I've called the guy out on a few forum etiquette faux pas incidents.
If anyone makes a Staff Post on this guy, jump right to official warning.