http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-13059480/the-potential-scp-5058#post-4508024

Please don't post duplicates of the same skip, be patient and wait for critique. This is considered as spam, a punishable offence, and I would notify staff if not for my device's limitations. If you want to upload/ share any future drafts, please use the edit function.

In one of your recent posts, I noticed you were bumping, which is also not permitted.

I don't have any staff permissions/ powers, but I do have a basic understanding of the site rules.
Please dont do this again, and make me have to go out of my way to report you.
You have been warned

P.S: As you can see the wait-times everyone is required to go through, only post proofed and formatted content. Lack of thode will sometmes put people off reviewing.

P.P.S: Not sure if this is 100% required, but did you get your idea greenlighted by anyone?

http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-13072977/scp-idea:flower-fox-revision-1#post-4514687

Hello Kennns, I have a few things to say about your feedback.
Ths feedback is much too vague. A good piece of critique should contain pieces of supported feedback. Simply saying you like/ dislike something is practically useless to the author. Why and what did you not like about the article? How could it be improved? What did you like about the article and why? How should the strong points be focused on to improve the entirety of the article?

Your formatting is good and I like the backstory

This is completely garbage feedback! It does not help the author, even remotely. How is the formatting good? Why do you like the backstory?
I strongly sugges that you read some of the many guides for reviewing content, preferably starting wit the one stickied to this (Ideas critique) category.

Further critique of this quality will most likely result in an official warning. This could potentially lead to a ban or other disciplinary action.

I personally don't give feedback on articles unless I see a blatant issue (I have been forbidden from giving it until I publish a succesful mainsite article. Something "blatant" enough for me to risk a ban hasn't happened yet).
Don't make the same mistakes as me and carefully analyze anything you're about to post.

Although I have no staff powers/ permssions take this as a warning

Can anyone collapse for me bc my device is so bad it'd take me 30 min

Edit: TheMightMcB bet me to it… i'll leave this here though as with 2% there is no time to do anything but leave this edit.

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Ok here are some things to make it better,
1.You need to hook the reader in,I really felt like not reading it but I did,to help you

2.Please dont put it all in a box,I understand what your trying to do but it doesnt fit,all the articles dont need that because if you read New member info,it makes you feel you ARE holding a page.

Thats all I could come up with,others might have more.

Ok first of all
1.Dont say when the restaurant will be open,you are writing an SCP report,not a restaurant guidebook,

2.Describe the furnace,say colour,material is made off,etc

3.maybe say the kitchen is to be guarded by an undercover agent.

4.Say the test log should have a minimum clearance,you dont want Janitors shouting about the oven.

5.I really like the Idea,keep it up,it really hooked me in.

6.Try to find a good picture of an oven.

Overall I really enjoyed reading,I will definetly upvote when it comes out.

Item # SCP-3554

caption=Scp 3554 in its origin location,just after Agent ████ activated it and just before 3554-2|

security Clearance Level 1[] 2█ 3[] 4[] 5[]

object class:Euclid

special containment procedures SCP 3554's chamber should be located on site 61.It is to be put on a class E or rarely D and locked in an 8x8x8m steel cell with the walls greater than 0.7 metres.It should be fed with human parts every hour.In the event of a case of a breach All personel should put on a band or watch with at last 1kg of Silver,gold or Platinum.

description:Scp 3554 appears to be a pink Striped Thin Hoodie For an woman approx 30 years of age.Its anamolous Abilites start when it was put on.
Scp 3554 seems to take no physical damage.When put on the subject starts having a seizure,that subject is now Scp 3554-1.
After about a minute of the seizure the subjects teeth growth speed Becomes 9000% until the teeth triple in size,then after 10-15 minutes the subject's size Grows until its x3 the primary size and its hair growth doubles.
Scp 3554-1 after the transformation is extremely hostile to all humans,if not fed human parts every 1.5 hours it will create scp 3554-2.

If The object Is not put on A human Every 8 hours,the object Will multiply Into 5 and teleport onto the Closest human being.Scp 3554 Cant be Taken off After put on,it can be only took off the subject when it dies.
Any subject Wearing Scp 3554 Will Die after 10 hours.

[Object class:Euclid/keter

Description:SCP 3554-2 is a being Composed full of Cyanogen (C₂N₂).It is Sentinent and can change sizes from about 1 metre of mass² to 27 metres of mass².Any Organic Matter that goes more then 10 cm inside the smoke dissapears.The Effects of The smoke on Inorganic Matter Vary on the time of contact with the object.It dissapears after 5 hours,when dissapearing,It implodes.After The implosion All gasses within a close proximity turn into an unidentified health hazard 3 Gas.Scp 3554-2 cant Devour more valuable materials.It also cant damage humans wearing gold,Platinum or silver.

See Corrosion Chart Corrosion Chart

Most attempts of Asking scp 3544-1 about its actions have been proven unsuccesfull.
see interview log A

Recovery:Scp 3554 Was found in a small house in Poland in the Town of [DATA REDACTED]
Inside there was Scp 3554 lying on the floor,an agent touched and activated it,The colour changed from green to pink,it almost instantly released 3554-2 and Killed (3) out of (5) agents
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_ INTERVIEW LOG A_
Interviewer:Dr.Doreeto.
Interviewed:Scp 3554-1.
Foreword:The Foundation is Asking Scp 3554 of the hostility For humans,Class D-7689 Is current Scp 3554-1.
Event:After an almost Catastrophical breach,Scp 3554-1 almost Killed Agent █████ and Almost Breached 5
Keter SCPs.
Begin Log
Dr.Doreeto:Hello 3554.
D-7689:Hello.
Dr.Doreeto:Why Did you Almost Kill Agent █████.
D-7689:(Inaudible).
Dr.Doreeto:What?Please Repeat.
D-7689:To finish …..(inaudible).
Dr.Doreeto:What?
D-7689:…
after 2 hours of trying to get 3xxx to finish the sentence
Dr.Doreeto:Interview ended,Security please escort Scp 3XXX back to his cell
END LOG 16:47
Aftermath:D-7689 Escapes and Kills (2)Security And badly Damages Dr.Doreeto,D-7689 Is put into containment
by (8)Security. the Foundation is trying to find out Whats the thing Scp 354 is trying to finish.

Summary:The Foundation Found out about a new object,and found out that Scp 3554-1 can mutate and become larger after time

Addendum:Research shows Scp 3554 said that to trick the foundation For no known reasonTt

First in the procedures plz change Liter To litre and you should make a collapsible about MTF gamma 6

Flawed JS posted.

Ok,dont make it Euclid and get rid of that bit bec ranking of S/E/K is maily difficulty of containment,like the lock in a box test,if u lock it in a box and nothing will happen,its safe,if you dont know what will happen its Euclid,if the box would be destroyed probably,it would be keter,thats all I have to say,I like the idea but its a bit like the scp "self Defence sugar"

I staff-posted myself.