Non-Disc Record - Jarzonmar6

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Sockpuppet?

Non-Disc Record - Jarzonmar6

Zyn 26 Sep 2018 23:51

New site member Jarzonmar6 (account age 35 days, site membership 32 days) recently noted in their introductions thread:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-7289960/september-2018-intros-writers#post-4004114

Hello everyone, I am Jarzonmar6. I was on this site before, but was incorrectly banned for accidentally inputting the wrong DOB (date of birth). Now that I've corrected it, I am looking forward to working on this site and expanding my knowledge of SCPs altogether. I was first introduced to SCPs by a video which I believe goes by the title of "Top 40 Most Deadly SCPs" on YouTube […]

ETA: of note, we do have an age record for this user. http://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-1825591

Of note, they've coldposted an article: http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-4024/comments/show

[…] SCP-4024 consists of a pair of domestic Boykin Spaniels, both male. SCP-4024-1 measures twenty-three (23) inches in length, and weighs in at eighty-one (81) pounds, or thirty-seven (37) kilograms. SCP-4024-2 measures twenty (20) inches in length, and weighs in at fifty-five (55) pounds, or twenty-five (25) kilograms. […] Physical studies have been done on SCP-4024-1 and SCP-4024-2 several times. SCP-4024-1 is an unnaturally bright shade of brown for its breed, while SCP-4024-2 has a more natural coat.

With accompanying author post: http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-4024/comments/show#post-4004363

Hello everyone. I've tried making my own SCP more than a few times, but this is my first official SCP, and I really want feedback. I'll accept constructive criticism, but please don't be a douche, okay? Okay :)

Keep an eye on, I guess?

Last edited on 29 Sep 2018 18:37 by Zyn Show more

Re: Non-Disc Record - Jarzonmar6

Zyn 29 Sep 2018 18:40

Noting that they've been posting some problematic feedback, addressed by staff members for only mentioning nitpicks and giving a misleading impression of the overall piece: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-7707252/scp-xxxx:the-transmitting-mist#post-4007615

A few suggestions to improve your SCP article.

• SCPs always need to be capitalized and have a dash (-) in between the word SCP and the item number. I.e. SCP-173
• In addition, the containment surroundings of scp XXXX should be within the temperature range of 273K to 287K; I may be wrong about this, but I'm pretty sure the admins prefer you use Celsius instead of Kelvin for temperature
• I noticed some grammar mistakes, so fixing those should be a top priority.

Other than that I'd say this is a pretty solid start, and is pretty good for a first SCP in my opinion. Sure, it could use some work, but I personally enjoy the idea. It's simple, yet also very interesting. Good luck with the idea! :D

Also, I see that English is not your 'mother language' as you called it. Maybe I could help with the grammar and other spelling things, as I live in the U.S. and speak English as my first language. Cheers!

Re: Non-Disc Record - Jarzonmar6

Zyn 10 Jan 2021 00:56

Seems to have deleted and then re-created their account: Jarzonmar6.

Re-applied to the site, accepted. Keep an eye on.