Non-Disc Record - Bikin

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Unhelpful feedback

Non-Disc Record - Bikin

Leveritas 24 Sep 2018 11:28

Bikin does not match any existing user name, multiple times. Here and later here.

Alces brought it to my attention. Keep an eye on.

Porting the problematic crit:

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http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-7627361/imagination#post-4001662

I'm not a good critique

I kinda like the idea, but some problems there.

• No Bolding.
• The half a km place.
• How can it be in the second form?
• It should be ranked higher since it can form black holes.

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http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-7617845/my-first-scp-please-give-feedback#post-4001642

I'm not a good critique, but it's my opinion.

+ Idea

The idea was great. A old house in the woods, and if you don't follow the rules, it kills you. That could possibly scare somebody.

+ Special Containment Procedures

It's good because of the idea of containing the house. You could have just make a area beside the house with armed guards ready at all times. Barely any people are going to notice it, so it's a great place for a area.

+ Description

If the sun goes out, close all blinds. Hide, and stay still until light returns.

Why do you need to hide though? You could just be in the side with no lights.

+ Discovery

One thing that I question, how did they find it? it's 40 meters in the wood. The woods could be 1 km of woods there. Plus, too many people are obsess with video games. The only reason I think people were missing is because they're poor, adventurers, or hunters.

+ Tests of Class-D and NTF

They're both too long so I pass. It was great.

+ The other SCP

I like the SCP because you can escape the house.

+ Rating

I rate it a 8/10. I like it, and it should be a part of the SCP community.

-o- =3 That reading and writing took forever

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Last edited on 25 Sep 2018 03:35 by Zyn Show more

Re: Non-Disc Record - Bikin

(account deleted) 25 Sep 2018 00:53

Also, as of 15 hours ago, this. Not breaking any rules, but like…kind of strange?

http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-2295410/how-to-use-this-forum-drafts-and-critiques#post-4001678

Ok Lord and Savior!

Last edited on 25 Sep 2018 03:36 by Zyn Show more