New site member OneGuy (account age 14 hours, site membership 3 hours) has recently been making a lot of problematic review posts lately, including some in the Introductions forum:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5663304/april-2018-intros-writers#post-3762382
Hey welcome, I'm new to, to write on I recommend you check out the guide hub http://www.scp-wiki.net/guide-hub has some useful guides to help you write and all. I personally reccomend "How to write a SCP" it covers most of the stuff you need to know, and if you need more check out some other ones based on their title
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5663304/april-2018-intros-writers#post-3762434
Also, it appears your underage, I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and say you aren't, try and act more mature. Even though I don't other people probably do, and being underage is a instant ban as you read in Guide for newbies. Also change your name, when people see "Epic" words like that most people think underage, I recommend something like HBChamp17, one word can make all the difference. Besides all that, welcome to the site
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-5705493/first-scp:eat-youth-repeat#post-3762467
First off, good job, the humanoid isn't cliqued, the concept is good for a first time and the writing is good. I don't view as its ready to publish yet though. One of the major problems is the description and the addendums, note that the addendums are supposed to be towards the end to finish it off, addendums 1-3 should be in the description, speaking of which, add more information to it, add it's powers and stuff like that. It should be obvious, not hidden away in interviews and addendums. Secondly, try and work on the tone, make it seem like a SCP article instead of a general description. try to check the guide hub for something on it, they have way more experience then me. Besides all that, good job.
I dropped a cease-and-desist on that last one. Move to official warning if they keep necessitating that staff clean up after them.
