New site member RyuTheDragonKM does not match any existing user name (account age and site membership 14 days) has recently been posting some problematic feedback in the forums:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-4012794/my-first-scp-wanting-some-tips-on-improving-it-and-making-mo#post-3616432 (on a draft that was almost entirely plagiarized text from another article)
For your first SCP I really like it!
There is one nitpick of mine and it's the spacing of your addendum.
Other than that it is really good!
However you might need to get feedback from professionals, which is something I'm not.
I would upvote
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-4013142/first-scp#post-3616468 (corrected by dankaar)
[…] You don't need this sentence. It's a giant tonal error.
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You don't explain why entry into his chamber is forbidden, you need to elaborate why entry is forbidden.
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Keep an eye on.