Non-Disc Record - DivergingApproach

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Non-Disc Record - DivergingApproach

Zyn 14 May 2017 16:23

New site member DivergingApproach (account age 1 day, site membership 11 hours) has recently been giving some problematic feedback in the forums:

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http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-2278399/scp-un-lucky-penny#post-2820397

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All units of SCP-3214 are to be contained in a storage unit in Site-38, with restrictions of access to anyone below Level-3 clearance. No personnel are allowed to bring any units of SCP-3214 outside its containment area save for testing purposes, […]

You've described no containment types or procedures.
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"Penny" is jargon for Americans. Properly describe what it is and what it represents. What is on each side of the item (we are talking about coins, right?) How does it closely resemble zinc? What kind of testing determined this? Who conducted the testing? What are the usual materials for a 'penny'?
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http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-2278153/took-an-early-left-turn#post-2820348

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Your containment is non-existent. There's a fence that's not monitored. That's it.

Under no circumstances are Foundation personnel to remain on-site after repairs or searches have been completed

Why? What happens? What kind of personnel are being used?

Geological samples show no meaningful difference in the composition of outside stones or SCP-XXXX samples compared to the regional average

This is vague. What kind of samples? What is the regional average? What are the differences? Why are they not meaningful?
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While their feedback isn't completely full of issues, they seem to repeatedly belittle containment procedures and also ask for extra information on aspects of drafts that aren't really that important to the overall article. I've captain-posted on both of the above; keep an eye on.

Last edited on 14 May 2017 17:37 by Zyn Show more