New site member Aurox has been leaving feedback that's on the shorter, vague and unhelpful side:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-2248250/scp-first-draft:bremen-syndrome#post-2802301
If your question is about adding to the idea without making it too scary, put it in here: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/c-89000/help:ideas-and-brainstorming
The format is off and unorganized, but the idea is solid. For the format, use the template provided: http://www.scp-wiki.net/how-to-write-an-scp
The paragraphs should be combined in areas ( your choice) and should be simpler. The idea of a memetic virus that increases the intelligence of animals to the point of sentience is interesting. Don't give up on this idea. Just do some work :)
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-2243853/scp-xxxx-ogden-by-dr-graves#post-2802304
Reconstruction would be an interesting route, since not many SCPs promote creation rather than destruction
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-2247960/an-attempt-at-a-non-humanoid-scp#post-2802081
This is a bit confusing. You seem to have the general idea of this SCP and what it can do, but your problem is passing that idea on to the reader. The explanations of effects are a bit hard to comprehend entirely, and this format of phases causes the reader to have to jump around the page.
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This entire file is written like a novel. Try to write it simpler, and as if you are the Foundation writing a report.]
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They seem to want to help, but at the moment they're not really positively contributing much. Keep an eye on.
Thanks to Zachary for informing me of this.