User started by being generally clueless in critters, before ending up getting kicked by Riemann for using the r-slur:
Nov 01 18:09:11 <AlfieHilton> im not really that familiar with the format and how you are supposed to present this stuff. i did a sand box and would love to here some feedback if anyone wants to help.
Nov 01 18:09:15 <AlfieHilton> http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/alfie-hilton
Nov 01 18:10:24 <DreadOnUs> I'm the last one who should give feedback sorry
Nov 01 18:10:28 <@cybersqyd> AlfieHilton, i don't have time to crit rn but i do have a question: have you applied to join the SCP wiki yet?
Nov 01 18:11:49 <AlfieHilton> i do not know
Nov 01 18:12:13 <@cybersqyd> .s join this site
Nov 01 18:12:14 <%Secretary_Helen> cybersqyd: Join This Site (Rating: +57. Written 12 years ago By: The Administrator) - http://scpwiki.com/system:join
Nov 01 18:12:18 <@cybersqyd> you'll want to peep at this then ^
Nov 01 18:12:40 <@cybersqyd> you'll need to be a site member before you can e.g. post in the forums to get critique or actually post the finished draft
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Nov 01 18:14:36 <DreadOnUs> Does anyone have a minute?
Nov 01 18:14:51 <LOGICIAN> sup
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Nov 01 18:15:08 <DreadOnUs> Hey mind giving me some feedback for an idea?
Nov 01 18:15:14 <LOGICIAN> I'll hear it out
Nov 01 18:15:27 <LOGICIAN> Riemann: o/
Nov 01 18:15:43 <DreadOnUs> So the idea was for an scp but I'll tell the story first
Nov 01 18:16:06 <@Riemann> \o
Nov 01 18:16:36 <LOGICIAN> Riemann: have you come to trade drafts? 0.0
Nov 01 18:17:28 <@Riemann> nah
Nov 01 18:17:33 <@Riemann> I got no drafts in the works
Nov 01 18:17:39 <@Riemann> just here to lurk and moderate
Nov 01 18:17:55 <DreadOnUs> Someone watching over us
Nov 01 18:18:03 <AlfieHilton> i did have a sign in for wiki but now every time i try to sign in it just doesnt
Nov 01 18:18:03 <@cybersqyd> riemann is here to kick ass and chew gum and they're all outta gum
Nov 01 18:18:11 <@cybersqyd> .s chrome fix
Nov 01 18:18:12 <%Secretary_Helen> cybersqyd: Fixing logins on Chrome and Edge (Rating: +79. Written 238 days ago By: aismallard) - http://scpwiki.com/third-party-cookies
Nov 01 18:18:14 <LOGICIAN> lol
Nov 01 18:18:16 <@cybersqyd> AlfieHilton, have a read of ^
Nov 01 18:51:10 <AlfieHilton> do i need to be a member of the scp foundation to have my sandbox critiqued??
Nov 01 18:51:18 <DreadOnUs> Yeah
Nov 01 18:51:27 <DreadOnUs> As cybersqid said
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Nov 01 18:51:56 <+Sonderance> AlfieHilton: Not necessarily, but it might be difficult to find critiquers without going through the greenlight process.
Nov 01 18:52:02 <@cybersqyd> ^
Nov 01 18:52:26 <@cybersqyd> you can technically get your concept greenlit here too but it's generally easier if you have a forum post to direct reviewers to
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Nov 01 18:54:30 <AlfieHilton> how will they know its greenlit
Nov 01 18:54:51 <@cybersqyd> reviewers will explicitly say they're greenlighting you if they are
Nov 01 18:55:05 <AlfieHilton> and how is this ligitimised
Nov 01 18:55:24 <@cybersqyd> by…them saying it? i'm not sure what you mean here
Nov 01 18:55:32 <@cybersqyd> like you can include e.g. chat logs or w/e as proof if you want
Nov 01 18:55:40 <AlfieHilton> right
Nov 01 18:55:45 <@cybersqyd> but again, it's easier if you have a thread they can post that on for a reason
Nov 01 18:55:48 <@Lazar> typically it's on the forum so it's self-evident
Nov 01 18:55:54 <AlfieHilton> and who do i show this proof to tho
Nov 01 18:56:06 <@cybersqyd> you just include the link in your draft forum post
Nov 01 18:56:12 <@cybersqyd> generally in here we accept your word
Nov 01 18:56:29 <AlfieHilton> yeah but who am i saying this word to
Nov 01 18:56:31 <@Lazar> honestly, just use the forum posts
Nov 01 18:56:40 <@Lazar> AlfieHilton: it's implicit when you post in the drafts forum
Nov 01 18:56:42 <@cybersqyd> AlfieHilton, have a read of: http://www.scpwiki.com/forum/t-10629348/new-draft-forum-policies which covers greenlighting in more depth
Nov 01 19:00:24 <AlfieHilton> can one of you just publish it as your own cuz i just wanna see it on the sire. i dont care if its mine or not. if you are someone who can be bothered to put it on the site please just read this
Nov 01 19:00:34 <AlfieHilton> http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/alfie-hilton
Nov 01 19:00:43 <DreadOnUs> I remember you saying "I'm inclined to say yes" or something but you weren't really clear if you liked the idea or it was a no go
Nov 01 19:00:49 <+Sonderance> AlfieHilton: That's not something that someone can do.
Nov 01 19:01:01 <@Lazar> DreadOnUs: I think you might be confusing me for someone else
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Nov 01 19:01:38 <AlfieHilton> surely one of you can just take my sandbox and publish it as ur own
Nov 01 19:01:39 <DreadOnUs> Do you remember the guy who said "hey mind giving me a greenlight real quick?"
Nov 01 19:01:49 <@cybersqyd> AlfieHilton, that would be against the rules
Nov 01 19:01:56 <@cybersqyd> AlfieHilton, how old are you?
Nov 01 19:02:06 <AlfieHilton> honestly i dont care i just cant be bothered with all this crap inbetween
Nov 01 19:02:13 <AlfieHilton> im 17
Nov 01 19:02:23 <%DrFullham> The rules are the rules regardless if you care about their application
Nov 01 19:02:35 <@cybersqyd> you only need to get greenlights to post a link to the idea in the drafts forum to get critique
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Nov 01 19:03:03 <@cybersqyd> but like, if you can't be bothered with 'all this crap inbetween', it's very likely your scp will not be as polished as it needs to be to survive
Nov 01 19:03:14 <AlfieHilton> so can anybody do that for me. cuz apparently im retarded and cant do it myself
Nov 01 19:03:22 :<-- Riemann has kicked AlfieHilton from #thecritters (nope)
Following this, they PM'd another user to get critique, and, after the user provided critique, ended up generally being a dick to them:
mine has mistery and scope for imagination
2:40 PM and the best scps are series 1
2:41 PM also i have a rendered picture of my own created scp. u have a ransom pic of a stop sign
2:41 PM urs just pulls the reader out of the world of scp
yeah well putting 1000 hurdles in front of me when ur credentials mean nothing is immensely annoying
2:43 PM its a filtering process that doesnt filter anything bad out. but all the creative brilliant people that just want their ideas to be seen
2:43 PM its people like all you that just get in the way for no reason with ur stop signs that have terrible stories so clinical terms what so ever
With consensus from four crit staff, AlfieHilton has been given a month long ban from #thecritters, with an appeal available if they want it.
