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Professor_Ian23, (W: 2 days | S: 20 hours).
- Posted without greenlights http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13696293/the-best-playground.
- Posted a link to their sandbox in the idea thread, then was kinda spammy in their responses to people http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13695589/a-new-idea.
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13696059/rules-second-attempt-at-an-scp
Maybe this could be a group of interest that utilizes this scp to achieve its goals. Other than that I think it's amazing but maybe you could have examples of the different signing things it has.
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13695954/time-algae
A great idea in my eyes but maybe you should make the thing that killed the captain be the creature that can withstand the algae's effects with a chemical in his skin or maybe blood. A final idea could be that maybe the captain of the ship took a sample of the algae and it created or called on the guardian to kill him so the sample couldn't be used. Or maybe you could just expand on the test logs. Mainly you should change the sailor thing as it seems a little overwhelming.
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13695965/sort-of-meta-mind-control
A good idea but, I'm pretty sure it's been done before so you should try to put your own heavy spin on the formula. Say maybe the author starts out halfway through the infection phase and than at the end he's infected fully or almost completely or he's near the end of infection at the beginning but is still slightly aware so he refutes his own writing until the final sentence which is the one you wrote.
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13695509/sleepy-time-ring
I am also new but I still want to review it.
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I think you might want to flesh out the sentimental story as it could make this SCP shine. the effect alone is kind of unremarkable but if a great story backs it and explains how it would definitely make up for the effect. I know that you said that you would talk about people with a coma (I don't want to write the story for you but maybe the original owner of the ring had a journal or the lover who made it had one talking about the other being in a coma ;) ) that is the only way that I think a coma could be interesting unless a hospital freaked out with someone just randomly dying out of nowhere. other than that the sleep walkers could be a big thing but it would need luck for something cool to happen to the sleep walkers other than maybe scaring someone with them just appearing. Sleep paralysis could be cool if the monster not moving at all and them seeing the world in a time stop state. sorry if it seems that I'm trying to completely change or help create it but I really just giving you ideas there is no pressure to add them. If you want to make it so everyone can make their own story in their heads for the sentimental part than ignore the advice about one of the original owners or creators having a journal.I hope that this helps in your creation of this scp
also names could be:
the ring of timeless love
or you could focus on the sleep part:
a ring forgetting time
a timeless ring for shut eyes alone (bit of a long one but I think it's the best one I came up with)
