New site member alphawolflilly (account age 13 days, site membership 12 days) recently posted the following on a new author's concept thread (which incorrectly had a sandbox link and not the correct template): http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-13463977/i-need-critique#post-4703482
I'm not qualified to give critique, so take this with a grain of salt. Honestly, your grammar, spelling, punctuation, formatting, everything - needs a LOT of work. You tried with the redactions, but the correct way to expunge parts of a scip is [DATA EXPUNGED]. Also, I'm not even going to get started with the concept. A portal to another dimension that makes you blind. There is no narrative. The term "pocket dimension" is reserved for 106. This is not 106. This is not original. I have no idea if you can even salvage this. All I know is that if you try to post this on the mainsite in its current state, it's going to get downvoted. Sorry for the rant. Just try to have above 1st grade punctuation and grammar.
I staffposted and sent the usual "please be more conscientious" PM. Keep an eye on.
