Non-Disc Record - Jayden AR

Summary:

Overly vague feedback

Non-Disc Record - Jayden AR

Zyn 08 Jul 2019 05:53

New site member Jayden AR (account age 5 days, site membership 1 day) has been posting some vague and misleading feedback in the idea forum:

http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-12196309/great-white-s-toothpaste#post-4300756

Hmmmmmm… Before I give you a review I need you to edit this and give it more detail. I like your concept but until there is more info I don't have much to say about this idea.

http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-12196099/a-big-orange-dodecahedron#post-4300685

(btw before you read this I cant greenlight anything)I think that in this case less is more (like you said at the end). I think that maybe it doesn't need a name, as you named it orange… also you need to proofread, I saw many grammar and spelling mistakes. In the end I like the idea, although it needs work.

Staffposted on both and sent my usual "please be more conscientious" PM. Keep an eye on.

Re: Non-Disc Record - Jayden AR

ProcyonLotor 08 Jul 2019 07:30

User has also been acting in an extremely entitled and immature manner in 17 under the username Chara.

Re: Non-Disc Record - Jayden AR

Edna Granbo 09 Jul 2019 01:54

Post made with permission from taylor_itkin

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Re-posted an idea after 11 hours.
Original thread: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-12198108/scp-idea-the-old-lamp#post-4301158
Repost: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-12199650/scp-idea-the-old-lamp#post-4301535

Re: Non-Disc Record - Jayden AR

Zyn 09 Jul 2019 04:50

They reposted it twice, looks like. Standard impatience/immaturity.

Of note, I got a reply from them regarding their problematic feedback:

Um… I'm deeply sorry if I did anything wrong but I'm unsure of what you mean? I don't usually reply to scps but when I do I give my honest opinion. If you could please tell me in what instance I have done this it would be helpful. I'm sorry to waste your time but I'm confused, and quite frankly, a little offended. I understand if you don't reply to this as I know that the staff are quite busy, and my request is…. well a bit needy and a little childish.

-Sincerely,
Jayden AR

Procyon's earlier assessment seems to be consistent here, especially since they don't seem to realize "if they did anything wrong".

I sent a reply telling them that honesty is fine, but forum reviewers are still obligated to be helpful, and linked them directly to the two staff posts and told them how to use their wikidot profile to check their recent comments.

Re: Non-Disc Record - Jayden AR

Zyn 10 Jul 2019 04:45

So they continued posting overly vague, unhelpful feedback: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-12203207/the-parentless-child#post-4302368

Okay, um well… I strongly think that you should include the following:

-What object class is it.

-What are its containment procedures.

-Where was it found.

-Weave some story into it.

-Please, just please use capitol letters and punctuation.

-What do you mean by force you to play with it. Does it force you to play until you die,
because if not then its not scary. I mean its literally Playtime from baldi's basics.

I know that this is just the ideas page, but adding these things will really help.

I've dropped a C&D order: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-12203207/the-parentless-child#post-4302420 and PM has been sent. Revoke on next infraction.

Re: Non-Disc Record - Jayden AR

Mew-ltiverse 25 May 2020 03:56

Permission to log given by RockTeethMothEyes

So this user was incredibly immature, whiney, and rude to reviewers for hours. I gave them several chances, which they ignored.

Logs below

+ Logs

<DrJaydenAR> oh rock i have a better narative now
10:04 PM <&RockTeethMothEyes> I don't do crit on Sundays.
10:04 PM M<Meska> Night!
10:04 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> I do, what is your narrative
10:04 PM D<DrJaydenAR> o
10:04 PM well
10:05 PM so basically as u already know its about a schoolhouse full of dead kids what u dont know yet is
10:06 PM K so the kids or scp-xxxx-1
10:06 PM get interviewed
10:07 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> and
10:07 PM D<DrJaydenAR> and they dont know anything about adults the outside world or growing up
10:07 PM And when they get pressured to talk bout it they stop talking
10:07 PM <TetrarteT> DrJaydenAR: .s SCP-026
10:07 PM D<DrJaydenAR> then after that
10:08 PM <&RockTeethMothEyes> SCP-026
10:08 PM S<%Secretary_Helen> PircBot 1.5.0 Java IRC Bot - www.jibble.org RockTeethMothEyes: SCP-026: Afterschool Retention (Rating: +442. Written 10 years ago By: DrEverettMann) - http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-026
10:08 PM D<DrJaydenAR> yes?
10:08 PM oh
10:08 PM k
10:08 PM ugh where was i oh wait ya
10:09 PM so they attack site 128 which is built around scp xxxx by the way
10:09 PM and people die execpt the person who interviewed them
10:10 PM And then see gets interviewed about what happened
10:10 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> okay so not a fan of the meaningless death
10:10 PM D<DrJaydenAR> and shes like insane now
10:10 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> nonononononon
10:10 PM D<DrJaydenAR> its not really that meaningless
10:10 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> it feels like you're just adding tropes to intrigue interest
10:10 PM and make up for an actual narrative
10:11 PM which you don't have
10:11 PM D<DrJaydenAR> it sounds way better in the draft out loud it sounds bad i realize that
10:11 PM <&RockTeethMothEyes> link the draf
10:11 PM <TetrarteT> DrJaydenAR: i;m afraid it doesn't jaden
10:11 PM F<forbiddenquest> interject: I read the draft, they still died for no reason
10:11 PM D<DrJaydenAR> Well
10:11 PM → Mars joined (~PI.C55713A7.D6E9EED5.A962DA56|criigc#PI.C55713A7.D6E9EED5.A962DA56|criigc)
10:11 PM F<forbiddenquest> They suddenly raided site 128, for no reason, explanation?
10:11 PM D<DrJaydenAR> i mean yes but no but yes
10:12 PM F<forbiddenquest> o/ mars
10:12 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> so im gonna be blunt DrJaydenAR
10:12 PM M<Mars> Heyo
10:12 PM <TetrarteT> It feels a bit like you're just creating an scp for the purpose of telling a one of shock tale through an interview
10:12 PM D<DrJaydenAR> :(
10:12 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> stop defaulting to your draft
10:12 PM if someone is critiquing the concept, "its better in the draft" is not an acceptable response to criticism
10:12 PM <+Calibri_Bold> ^
10:12 PM M<Mars>
^{10:13 PM D<DrJaydenAR> agreeded
10:13 PM E<EyJeHn> ^}
10:13 PM <&RockTeethMothEyes> EyJeHn: Unnecessary.
10:13 PM Z<+Zoobeeny> Please do not continue this chain-
10:13 PM E<EyJeHn> Sorry :0
10:13 PM <&RockTeethMothEyes> Also
10:13 PM I don't need more than two people on this
10:13 PM D<DrJaydenAR> …
10:13 PM <&RockTeethMothEyes> Stop dogpiling.
10:14 PM E<EyJeHn> Okay ��
10:14 PM D<DrJaydenAR> ya if u continue to dogpile i will be crushed!
10:14 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> im critiquing the idea, I don't need help, as much as I appreciate your enthusiasm
10:14 PM <&RockTeethMothEyes> DrJaydenAR: Knock it off.
10:14 PM M<Mars> My fault, I was just agreeing with Mew
10:14 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> DrJaydenAR: so would you like to respond to what I said
10:15 PM D<DrJaydenAR> ….yes
10:15 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> okay then, I am listening
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10:16 PM D<DrJaydenAR> so what is it we were talking about, sry got distracted someting about how my death was meaningless?
10:16 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> I said more
10:16 PM ⇐ minathewitch quit • toasterbathmaster → thetoasterman
10:16 PM D<DrJaydenAR> OH ya
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10:16 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> > stop defaulting to your draft
10:16 PM >
10:12 PM if someone is critiquing the concept, "its better in the draft" is not an acceptable response to criticism
10:16 PM D<DrJaydenAR> The interviewer shouldnt be insane right
10:16 PM OH YA
10:16 PM THAT POTATOE
10:17 PM <&RockTeethMothEyes> Excuse me?
10:17 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> and the answer to that is hell no they shouldn't be "insane"
10:17 PM D<DrJaydenAR> ur right…
10:18 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> Mew-ltiverse you're acting very immature right now, and I need you to pull yourself together, to be blunt
10:18 PM D<DrJaydenAR> so…?
10:18 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> this is a warning
10:18 PM D<DrJaydenAR> i understand
10:18 PM T<thetoasterman> OCuin: Sorry for the late reply. It was getting really late. I have posted a response on the thread. Could you check it out?
10:18 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> cool, glad we're on the same page
10:18 PM so, back to your idea
10:19 PM I don't think the kids should escape containment and kill crazy researchers
10:19 PM D<DrJaydenAR> ok
10:19 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> I think you're using action to make up for a narrative
10:19 PM D<DrJaydenAR> yes…..
10:20 PM because i still cant write narrative right…
10:20 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> so what are you trying to say with this piece
10:20 PM what is the message
10:20 PM that you want to tell
10:21 PM just throwing in more action instead of narrative will not go over well
10:21 PM D<DrJaydenAR> im not sure honestly and i know thats a bad answer but i cant think of something better my scp to be blunt is just bad
10:21 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> so lets help try to get this piece a narrative
10:21 PM D<DrJaydenAR> ok
10:21 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> okay now I don't need you to self pity
10:22 PM D<DrJaydenAR> ok
10:22 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> im giving reasonable critique and you're pitying yourself, and I honestly don't need that
10:22 PM D<DrJaydenAR> ok
10:23 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> and your vague replies are not helping
10:24 PM D<DrJaydenAR> okay…? i dont wanna be disrespectful im sorry
10:24 PM <%Mew-ltwoverse> because im feeling patient you get one more chance from me with your idea
10:25 PM so im going to ask what inspired this idea
10:25 PM inspiration can help spark narrative
10:26 PM so lets go to the seed this sprouted from
10:26 PM <DrJaydenAR> Well suprisingly it was inspired by an assaignment from school to write a narrative about a school with no teachers and i know that probabley doesnt help
10:27 PM my narrative was bad
10:27 PM no supise there
10:27 PM suprise*
10:27 PM → %DarkStuff (halfopped) joined ⇐ @LadyKatie quit
10:28 PM ← DrJaydenAR (~ten.tsacmoc.ac.1dsh.0B5A711B-CRInys|criigc#ten.tsacmoc.ac.1dsh.0B5A711B-CRInys|criigc) was kicked by %Mew-ltwoverse: so you're still self-pitying after I said stop

I'll let operational staff and higher decide their fate.

Last edited on 26 May 2020 01:34 by Mew-ltiverse Show more

Re: Non-Disc Record - Jayden AR

pxdnbluesoul 25 May 2020 04:11

Not going to weigh in on the particulars as I hold no particular status in #thecritters but just a reminder to chat staff there to make use of +m when things get hectic and there's dogpiling happening. It's a really effective way to get everyone to slow down and focus on what you need them to focus on.