New site member LordofTheCrabs (account age 12 days, site membership 11 days) has been posting some low-content feedback in the draft forums:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10751879/my-first-scp#post-4193765
Dunno if Im qualified but, very nice SCP ,only thing I can suggest is that you add a footnote explaining what a "erythrocyte" is
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10755733/my-scp-idea-c-c-please#post-4193964
Seems like a very interesting idea, however the sentence "NO CONVERSATION IS TO EVER TAKE PLACE WITH SCP-4973-1. If a conversation is to take place all doors must be locked and secured." is a bit confusing you could try saying something like all interactions must be approved by_ or any interactions should be monitored by___.Hopefully this is relevent
I sent them the usual "please be more conscientious" PM. Keep an eye on.