New site member PewPewTrash (account age 46 days, site membership 38 days) has been posting some vague, minimal feedback on the draft forums, often of the "someone else can give you better feedback" variety:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10706284/scp-xxxx-mirror-image#post-4190674
I’m no professional but… I really liked this! Of course it’s not publishing material, but the way you made it so vague and mysterious that the SCP wanted to speak to the researcher was great! Of course, I’m on mobile, so I will only point out the large problems: When the SCP eats, does he just goes to the cafeteria? It doesn’t specify wetter he is guarded. Also why is there padding on the mattress?
Anywho, someone more professional can respond but, great idea! Amazing plot, and I loved it already! Feel free to reach out to me when you’re done so I can read it!
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10708373/scp-article-review#post-4190665
I’m on mobile so I can’t care to right a ton or analyze this, but a big thing isn’t that your clerical tone and punctuation is the best, and you should double check everything is written correctly, such as commas or capitalizing the beginning of sentences. Someone more professional can review this and give you more help.
Also, in the picture title, there is literally no reason to [redacted] the recovery teams name and this drives people crazy. Even in, for instance, 096-1 Expedition, they don’t redact names or anything because people hate that, and it makes the story more involved.
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10709545/a-thought#post-4190659
Usually taking ideas up with the Brainstorming forum is best first, but I think this has really good potential as a joke SCP, but if you alter it correctly it could be a real one too. Joke SCP’s are great places to start because people usually won’t be as harsh as it isn’t meant to be serious.
Of course, I can’t tell you what to do better because I’m still trying to push a good SCP out also, but maybe someone else can!
Keep an eye on.