New site member Theemoassassin (account age 2 days, site membership 1 day) has been posting overly short, vague feedback in the forums:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10323355/the-traumatic-chair-by:ananomalouswriter#post-4155706
You did an amazing job as a first time writer! I can relate, because this is also my first time! Just follow the advice of the last comment, and remove 'the' from "But individuals have the long term effects of paranoia and heightened levels of anxiety."! Good luck with writing!
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10323355/the-traumatic-chair-by:ananomalouswriter#post-4155707
Just realized. I own a bunch of the same kind of chair in the photo. 0~0
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10322376/scp-draft-all-critique-is-accepted#post-4155709
Very good! I do believe that you should add a backstory, and some more parts to lengthen the story, like tests on the entity, but this is a very promising concept, and will definitely get MY upvote!
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-10323657/my-first-scp-go-easy-on-me#post-4155712
Okay, this concept is very good and kind of lengthy, which is a good thing. You should add recordings of previous tests, to show how the foundation got the knowledge. Also, remove names and dates from the document to add more secrecy! You did a great job and should be proud of your work!
Cease and desist order dropped on the first thread, and PM sent. Revoke on next infraction.